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for Are you my Boyfriend?

by KotoneHime

person MeSmErIzE
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious!!
I just LOVE to see how the poor smexy Kakashi would be tortured more soon! ^_^ Gaara was so cutely
oblivious to his object of desire's discomfort..X-D
If only other characters' reaction (like Team Kakashi, Hokage, Tenzou and basically other people in Konoha and Suna :-D) towards this whole newly-discovered Kazekage's feelings for the Copy Nin could be emphasized more..I couldn't be more excited ;-)
(Yeah, me too can't wait until the taken-off pants part!! *lol*;p)
person Shiruy
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I SO hope you continue this soon! XD I have never before seen anything like this story or even this pairing, it's brilliant! I love how horrified Kakashi is, and how innocently blunt Gaara makes his statements. XD
"You say I have nothing to worry about, but I have this insane need to wrap my arms around you right now and it’s getting on my nerves."
This sentence cracked me up SO bad. XDDD *has to laugh every time she reads it* Pure genius, seriously. I'm very curious to find out how Gaara will eventually succeed in getting Kakashi to Suna, and how long Kakashi will be able to resist the Kazekage's advances. Gaara's just so adorably oblivious.. *squee* XD
Really, really great story!! ^__^
Shiruy
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto! But loved the jutsu he used ^_^

email me when you update please: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Belial
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!
Please add Sai!!!
person The Black Sand of Gara
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow,

I like, I really really like this story even though it seems to be an out of right field pairing, I think it works. I can actually see the two of them together because of how opposite they are. And with the straight forwardness that is Gaara, Kakashi will love it. For who else is more likely to go up to someone and say ‘Wanna fuck’ then Gaara, so Gaara is perfect for Kakashi, even if he has to work with Gaara at first so he understands what everything means.

I just love the idea of the two of them together. But I most say my favorite line (which is actually the whole paragraph) in the story was:

“Considering his two students taking said test to be Uchiha Sasuke, runaway returned, and Uzumaki Naruto, pupil trained by a sannin and Akatsuki slayer, Kakashi did not have to do a whole lot of prepping. He was present when they were told they would have to participate in the exams to reach the next rank and was thoroughly amused by their reactions. 'I killed like, everyone in Akatsuki!' the blond had yelled while Sasuke growled 'I killed a sannin.' Tsunade scoffed at them and told them to take the test or forever be gennins.”

Was too good. I can totally see them acting that way on both Tsunade’s part as well as with Naruto and Sasuke. Very well done I can’t wait until the next chapter. Hopefully you have not given up hope on this story all together and if not then I’ll see you next chapter. ^-^

The Black Sand of Gara
person Momma Cat
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Considering I helped you write this I just had to say I love the summary. Like Gaara found a toy he had to have. LOL
person pangasius
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cute! I hope to read more of this ^^
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! this story is so funny! i was laughing so hard when Naruto was saying all that stuff about Sasuke to Konhamaru only for it all to backfire. POOR NARUTO! lol and with the questions that Gaara was asking his brother... god! through out the whole time i was crying from laughing so hard. KEEP IT UP!!!!
person Raholea
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* oooh, i love the start!! it has lots of potential and i absolutely love your gaara!! quite a unique pairing but i would love to see more when you do update! Yay!!!