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by SumiHatake

schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh how sad and hot lol I love the way you write
person mourn
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please upload more chapters
person Anise
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot, I'm rather liking the whole voyeurism thing there's just something very sexy (and perverted) about what Tenzou is doing. I wonder if Kakashi and Iruka will figure out Tenzou's there but not say anything because they like the idea of someone watching, plus I look forward to Tenzou joining in because in my world that would be the obvious progression of things ;) I look forward to reading this one, I don't read a lot of Tenzou but this will definitely be fun so I'm looking forward to more ^_^
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two: Tenzou joins in!

I loved this, there should be more voyeurism in fanfiction!
person RyuEarth
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes! I always pictured Tenzou peeping on Kakashi and Iruka! XD
And you brought this to life! This was so good! *blushes*
I hope that you don't get writer's block and are able to finish your other stories, so that you can continue this one! ^^;