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This is a complete favorite of mine. I love Parent Trap so much! Please update soon I wanna know what happens to June and what Orochimaru's gonna try next, does Itachi get his eyesight back, what about Sasuke finally giving into Naruto, or what're the Kiddies gonna think about getting their parents together? Hmmm?

amazing! june knew orochimaru and kabuto spiked the drink, but with what? like why is she like, well, comatose? o well. update!!!!

Oh no!!! June!!!! Just when Itachi is holding her!!! Can't wait ti know what happens next. Especially for Sasuke. He needs to take that stick out of his butt and start molesting his Blondie. :D

At this point June knows that Kabuto and Orochimaru are trying to kil Itachi and will most likely try to kill her because she has figured out from Gaara and her own ingenuity that they know she knows about them. in spite of this she goes back and pretends that nothing is going on and decides not to tell ANYBODY ANYTHING about whats going on? not even the man that she believes she is falling for that she is going through all this trouble for? that she just drank poisoned champagn for? come on now, that makes no sense what so ever. WHy go through all that trouble and not even try to protect your damnn self.

Hmmm... I have mixed feelings about this story. There are certain things I like, and other things I'm not sure about. I like the way you've portrayed the characters in this, even your OC is good. And I think the premise is cute and find the latest plot twist to be exciting, the mystery angle is quite enjoyable. (This seems to have become the main focus of the story now?) But the part of the story that's not working for me is the stuff between Naruto & Sasuke. It took really long into the story for them to finally meet (almost too long), and then once they did, everything between them has felt very rushed. They're soul mates? And have been lusting after one another for years and years? And their kids just adore one another? It's all so conveniently inevitable, I don't feel much excitement about them getting together. They don't need the whole "getting to know you" phase since they already know one another. I feel like if you eliminated the stuff with Itachi and the other characters, their part of the story would read more like a one- or two-shot. You could always throw in some drama to keep them apart, like a big misunderstanding, but that would feel contrived after the perfect set-up they've gotten. I feel like the best thing to do at this point is to get them together as quickly as possible, as you already have been doing, and then have them deal with any future problems (like Orochimaru) as a couple. I dunno.

WOW!!! This story is Absolutely Fabulous!!! I can't wait to find out what happens to June and Itachi. The suspense is going to kill me for sure. I also can't wait to have more smexyness between Naruto and Sasuke.

Wow, I honestly forgot about this story. I had to reread some but it was a nice surprise to have today. So thanks for the chapter. I am soooooo happy that Naruto and Sasuke are starting to get together. I just hope Sasuke will finally accept Naruto advances before someone else comes into the picture to steal Naruto. Maybe that would finally get Sasuke into gear. Well update soon and thanks for the update

OOOH! i just found this!! and the very fisrt chappie is lovely and great and full of Sasu pather mode xDDD LOVE IT!! i will keep reading the following chappies later.

BAHAHAHAHAHA, WHO LOVES AYAME FOR TACKLING KEI?!?! I DO, I DO!!!!! XD
This chapter equals luff. XD

Aw, I have two options: continue reading but be exhausted tomorrow at work or go to bed and long to continue reading this story. *Sigh* What to do, what to do?