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I do hope you continue this soon. It is one of the more original stories floating around here. I'd like to see how you introduce Naruto, since I already love the way you've written Sasuke so far.

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Awwww I like cute! And so far this story has lots of it XD. I'm not sure how I feel about June. I love her name by the way, that's always a contention with me and OC's, it's silly I know, but I think names are really important and shouldn't sound completely off when compared to everyone else's in the story. Like for instance Jeff or Bob - Hey Naruto, Hey Jeff ... o.0 *shudders*. But I love June's name so I'm happy with you XD. LOL, yeah I know I'm a dork. But meh, my whole thing with her is I've been in Itachi's position, not the going blind part, but the 'repetitive doctor's visits that seem to go nowhere and serve no purpose other than to waste my time telling me things I already know' part. And I think that if someone threw my chart down the hall I would quickly follow it and then exit. Now see if she had said that part about Tsunade not being an eye specialist from the start, okay. She recovered really well, but that start... *frowns*. But then there is all the hope concerned with getting a new doctor and a new perspective. And it always starts out kind of excting, and then blah. It makes me sad a lot. Urgh... I'm slowly growing to despise doctors. LOL I completely understood itachi's urge to just lie and say no, nothing happened this morning, but I'm glad that he didn't. If nothing else June intrigues me, I'm more than willing to give her a chance as a character, despite her being an evil chart-throwing doctor XD. I'm dying to know who was on the phone, that part cracked me up. I kinda wish it was Naruto XD. And Deidara as Mr. Dependable Guy and the 'voice of reason'... LOL. I loved that for some odd reason. It was strange but cool, like watching Colin Farrell play the staunch, upstanding police man in Minority Report XD. Trippy XD. I love Itachi's character, he's wicked but sweet and caring with it. The disease also lends an enormous amount of humanity to his character which in the manga is still, even after we know his motives, ambiguous. LOL, I guess he just hides it really well, it's nice to be able to get into his head and actually see it. *Hugs u* Thank you so much for the speedy update!! *Showers you in giant sized smiles and candy*

Very cool story so far.
I love the chibi Uchihas! Sasuke's kids are so cute!
update!

Great story so far! 2 chapters in and I am already captured!

very awesome job keep up the good work!!!! oh and when does naruto come in? is he going to be the twins new substitute teacher? that would be so cool!!

I really enjoy this story and I can't wait to see Naruto
Thanks for making Sasuke a great character.
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This premise is so cute. Sasuke is such a good daddy, I love it! I love Sasuke's two lil uchihas - Touya's so wise and Kei seems a bit Naruto-esque (I wonder how the boys are going to interact with him)! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Very cute. ^_^

This is highly amusing thus far. Can't wait to see more. x3
And Sasuke was utterly adorable with the boys. x3