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by BishounenKrazed

schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a really great story. I can't wait to see what you do with it, and I hope you update often.
And Sasuke is so seriously cute in this story!!! I loved it. You don't often see him with kids.
XD So please update fast
Oh, and Kakashi is as awesome as ever... As is Shika.
And I bet Itachi wil be to. Can't wait.
XD LANE
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, cannot wait for more!! the kids are so cute
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is damned adorable!
person Vesca
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuck Yeah!!! Welcome Back!!!!
person Dragon7
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
person Damp
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Chouji?”

“Yes, sir?”

“Shoot me.”


Funny!! And the thought of Sasuke being a single family man, god, I was just loving this chapter!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!

-Damp *And I can't wait to see you updating your other stories!!*
person Allys
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I missed you like crazy!! I'm so happy that your back and writing again. Yeah I know I've been awol too, but everyone has to a certain extent. *Loves on you* Personally I adore this idea. So much that I tried to write it once. Right down to Naruto being the kids substitute teacher (if that is what you have planned). But LOL, the kids were Itachi's. I made him kick the bucket and Sasuke sort of inherited the children who were a girl and boy named Tomoe and Takeshi. But yeah I SUCK at writing. i was only trying cause I really Really wanted to read it! And now I CAN!! XD *Loves on you some more*. You're excellent and I love how you read my mind sometimes. I hope you get bitten by a writing bug and find yourself exploding with this extreme need to churn out chapters XD *luffles*. It's really good to have you back XD. Oh and I like the name. I loved the movie (first and second time) so i only have good associations ♥
person Gwyllion
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G. I'm in LOVE!!! SO IN LOVE!!!!! <3333333333333 I seriously CAN NOT wait to see where you will take us with this story! There's so many wonderful plots and ideas going on in my head. My heart's telling me that Naruto will be the new teacher and WA LA! Sasuke will meet him! Yeah? Yeah? *nudges* OMG Nomme....I swear I could eat you alive! Ilu. <3 Sasuke's so very wonderful with his kids. They're surrounded by all my favorites characters playing perfect roles in the household. Especially Kakashi. Lol! I can totally see him as the kids' favorite 'uncle' super nanny. Hahahahah...Kakashi is made of win. THANK YOU so much again for sharing this. If you hadn't announced it over at the Y, I would never had known and squee my love to you. *loves*
person Gwyllion
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries* AFF ate my review....T__T Copied and paste....

O.M.G. I'm in LOVE!!! SO IN LOVE!!!!! <3333333333333 I seriously CAN NOT wait to see where you will take us with this story! There's so many wonderful plots and ideas going on in my head. My heart's telling me that Naruto will be the new teacher and WA LA! Sasuke will meet him! Yeah? Yeah? *nudges* OMG Nomme....I swear I could eat you alive! Ilu. <3 Sasuke's so very wonderful with his kids. They're surrounded by all my favorites characters playing perfect roles in the household. Especially Kakashi. Lol! I can totally see him as the kids' favorite 'uncle' super nanny. Hahahahah...Kakashi is made of win. THANK YOU so much again for sharing this. If you hadn't announced it over at the Y, I would never had known and squee my love to you. *loves*
person Infek
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be a very amusing story, I presume. I really thought it was cute. =)