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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
See, now I'm sad I decided to go to bed! I missed reading this!! Oh well, I guess the fact that I've read it now should keep me happy. ^_^
I was hoping the plot would get interesting in the sense of some bad guy doing something sinister... and it has!! Yay!!!!!!!!! <3
I was hoping the plot would get interesting in the sense of some bad guy doing something sinister... and it has!! Yay!!!!!!!!! <3
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm all caught up. T.T
This chapter was adorable!!! I so totally love those three kids. I definitely look forward to reading more when you get the chance to update!!!!!
This chapter was adorable!!! I so totally love those three kids. I definitely look forward to reading more when you get the chance to update!!!!!
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww, too cute!!! I am most definitely going to LOVE this story!! Great start!! Aww, OFF TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahaha, I absolutely love Fujimiya-sensei!! I love that she threw the chart and pretended to not have read anything from it. And I love the message she gave to have delivered to whomever it was that called her. Way funny. XD
I love Itachi and the boys and Kakashi too. I love Sasuke but I'll love him more when he and a certain someone get together. ^_^
...I feel like I'm forgetting something... OH YEAH!! 'The Look' and 'The Look II'. XD Itachi should have those patented.:3
I love Itachi and the boys and Kakashi too. I love Sasuke but I'll love him more when he and a certain someone get together. ^_^
...I feel like I'm forgetting something... OH YEAH!! 'The Look' and 'The Look II'. XD Itachi should have those patented.:3
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, ok so last chapter (more specifically what Kei said) makes a lot more sense. Heh. I love Kei and Touya. And Ayame. 8D
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww. >.> I feel like I've said this for the past three chapters so far... Meh, oh well. This story is adorable and I love it to pieces. ^_^
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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hm...I just tried to leave a review and it somehow didn't work. So here goes another try...
I read the whole story in one sitting. And I'm definitely hooked. This whole setup is great and this is really fun to read.
I love Naruto and Sasuke and their "flirtatious banter"/sexual tension. And Sasuke with kids is just cute. Naruto's little soulmates though made me smile.
And Itachi and June...I don't usually like OCs, but you definitely do a good job with her. Although Itachi's whole eye diagnosis screw up definitely seems like a nefarious plot. Especially since Kabuto and probably Orochimaru and the whole deal with the Uchiha company is involved. And now June's going to Gaara?!
You have plot, characterization, and humor...it's fantastic. Can't wait to read more!
PS- what is it with everyone saying things in Spanish/Chinese (June)?
I read the whole story in one sitting. And I'm definitely hooked. This whole setup is great and this is really fun to read.
I love Naruto and Sasuke and their "flirtatious banter"/sexual tension. And Sasuke with kids is just cute. Naruto's little soulmates though made me smile.
And Itachi and June...I don't usually like OCs, but you definitely do a good job with her. Although Itachi's whole eye diagnosis screw up definitely seems like a nefarious plot. Especially since Kabuto and probably Orochimaru and the whole deal with the Uchiha company is involved. And now June's going to Gaara?!
You have plot, characterization, and humor...it's fantastic. Can't wait to read more!
PS- what is it with everyone saying things in Spanish/Chinese (June)?
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah! I loved it! dfsjhldsughliiuhvopfoe'['r';rsa'rsa'rtsa'p9esieruioyearoi *froths at the mouth and falls to the floor*
Kiki
Kiki
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
when he says fun things are u thinking what im thinking
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love this story and am looking forward to future chapters. Papa!Sasuke just makes me happy for some reason.
I have to ask though, just what role does Sakura play in this? In different chapters you've had her as different people, it seems (aka one chapter she's insulting Ayame's mother, another she is Ayame's mother), which might just mean I'm missing something or it could be a small continuity error. Just figured I'd mention it. Either way, I can't wait til the next chapter comes out...especially if Sasuke starts to get over himsellf in it. :B
I have to ask though, just what role does Sakura play in this? In different chapters you've had her as different people, it seems (aka one chapter she's insulting Ayame's mother, another she is Ayame's mother), which might just mean I'm missing something or it could be a small continuity error. Just figured I'd mention it. Either way, I can't wait til the next chapter comes out...especially if Sasuke starts to get over himsellf in it. :B