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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yayyyy!!!
Awesome chapter! I want to know the stories about Sasuke too!!!! I hope you'll reveal them in the future.
Still hoping for Naruto's point of view! And another update!!!
As soon as possible would be nice (angelic smile).
XD Mysterious June... What shall we learn next? And why the hell did Itachi have to fall asleep with tubes all over his body?
XD LANE
Awesome chapter! I want to know the stories about Sasuke too!!!! I hope you'll reveal them in the future.
Still hoping for Naruto's point of view! And another update!!!
As soon as possible would be nice (angelic smile).
XD Mysterious June... What shall we learn next? And why the hell did Itachi have to fall asleep with tubes all over his body?
XD LANE
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Another amazing chappie by you! I'm loving the fact that we get to know more about June's past. i feel bad about her, but then she wouldn't become this beautiful and strong woman we're reading now. I think she's perfect for Itachi. And ITACHI! You sly old fox you! Lol! I wouldn't mind cuddling with him.... ;)
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!
Little over enthusiastic there, maybe. I just love your story, and I'm always pretty over exited when you post a chapter.
The chapter was awesome. Your writting is still as good, and I couldn't find any inconsistancies or anything like that.
I would really love a chapter from Naruto's point of view though.
I want to know what the hell he's thinking.
Anyway, I'm really really glad that you updated, and I can't wait for another chapter!
Hope you'll update soon!
XD LANE
Little over enthusiastic there, maybe. I just love your story, and I'm always pretty over exited when you post a chapter.
The chapter was awesome. Your writting is still as good, and I couldn't find any inconsistancies or anything like that.
I would really love a chapter from Naruto's point of view though.
I want to know what the hell he's thinking.
Anyway, I'm really really glad that you updated, and I can't wait for another chapter!
Hope you'll update soon!
XD LANE
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, man I'm lazy; been meaning to read this since it was posted...
You've done brilliantly with this chapter. I like where you're going with Naruto and Sasuke's previous encounter. I look forward to your next installment in this fic. It promises to be interesting.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
You've done brilliantly with this chapter. I like where you're going with Naruto and Sasuke's previous encounter. I look forward to your next installment in this fic. It promises to be interesting.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg I am sooo glad you have continued this, I love this fic and was hoping to see more someday, soo glad you wrote more and cant wait for more chapters in the future, omg Sasuke's reactions to Naruto are just priceless, I kept snickering, trying no to wake my 1 1/2 month old nephew but alas he woke up when I was a bit loud when Sasuke called his mother the B word in his head lmaooo too funneh, ty ty ty for the wonderful read, cant wait for more, glad to see you back, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Smiled all the way through the chapter. I liked it, and how awkward Sasuke makes his life XD. I find him hilarious and the kids are all so cute I could just eat them. Playing ninja's and the boys running away after Ayame appeared to defend them XD. And the dinner and Sasuke's calm face but internal dialogues. I love him too much. And Itachi. And Naruto. And the kids. There's nothing I don't love (but I loved that little flash back snippit most, hurhurhurhur }:D~).
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a very well written story. I really like the character development and the plot is also great. The only drawback I see is an OC who is quickly becoming a Mary Sue. Too perfect is no good: good looking, smarter than Tsunade, best friend to one of the main characters, etc. Is it too much to hope that there will be no pairing OC/Itachi?
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can’t wait to read what happens next.
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't toy LOL. Love it! I first encountered this story when I was new to "the FANDOM" and completely foreign to the idea of 'yaoi'. Only interested in canon timeline stories, surprisingly I read the whole then 4 chaps.
And reread them again tonight. You've certainly upped the ante and I can't wait I CAN'T WAIT!
Loving evilly awesome Tachi and childishily evil Sasuke. As for Naruto shucks he's coming off hott seme LOL.
Cheers
And reread them again tonight. You've certainly upped the ante and I can't wait I CAN'T WAIT!
Loving evilly awesome Tachi and childishily evil Sasuke. As for Naruto shucks he's coming off hott seme LOL.
Cheers
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK first off, you are amazing. Seriously, how did I miss this story? Is Sasuke afraid of his family finding out he's gay? I also love that you are making Itachi straight. I love OCs in M/F since there are so few of the female Naruto ppl that I would want to read about. I really look forward to reading more of this story. I nearly cried when I got to the last chapter, I was so dissappointed that was all for now. I'll be keeping an eye out for this story.