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for Parent Trap

by BishounenKrazed

person ZeroZoey
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very glad you updated, I really love this story, it has been to long. Anyway keep up the great work and update soon.
person gwyllion
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*flails like a mofo* How friggin' ADORABLE!!! Ayame doing her ninja moves while chasing after Touya and Kei was the most cutest scene here. I absolutely adore them. In my mind, I already had them down in a pic as grown up children. Beautiful and cute lil' teens they will be. With the brothers being the protective ones while Ayame is a blooming flower ready to be picked. And for some reason, they will always remain childhood best fiends. Ignore me...I can ramble all day on how I see the kids. I love your characters so much!
Now that we know how and where Sasuke and Naruto had met, we can now picture what will happen if only Sasuke would just give into his lust and feelings for the blonde. That was a very sexy scene where they were making out in the club. JUST YUM! Now I shall have to wait patiently for your next chappie. Gwyll is addicted! <3<3<3
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just went through the end of that chapter again.
It really is intriguing.
I hope you post the next chapter soon!
Lane.
person Calcifer
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant -heart heart heart- I'm loving this and looking forward to the next chapter. I'm totally curious about how Sasuke and Naruto know each other, and why Sasuke ran away.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Okay, that was the long scream of distress which is meant to show you how unhappy I am at not having the next chapter right under my eyes this instant. My enter isn't working, so this may look pretty weird. Anyway, I am so glad that you updated! And this was an awesome chapter. And considering I'm a stupid reader, I have not the slightest idea where they know each other from! BUT IT WAS AWESOME AND I WANT TO FIND OUT! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! Here you will recognise another cry of distress which should indicate that I would love to have the next chapter soon. Oh, and it's good to know you aren't dead. XD Anyway, hope to read more soon, and I'm glad you got all your inspiration etc back. It's so sad when people just don't want to write anymore... XD Lane.
person shadowphoenix143
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this story is amazing so far! Very intriguing and humorous. I think I know how Sasuke and Naruto know each other... my guess is that it has to do with Sasuke's now deceased wife... maybe? Well anyway, I look forward to finding out!
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this alot and I cant wait to see more of it.
person Tait
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You are back. I'm so happy. There is just something I love about parenting and Sasu/Naru.
Don't understand it, I just go with it. Great story. I'm looking forward to more.
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my lord, I really have fun reading this, I love building plots, it has a nice pace! I absolutely positively ADORE the relationship with Naruto and Ayame! It makes my heart leap and giggle like a school girl!! Sasuke is such a daddy hehe! They are so cute with their kids! Props for awesomeness! Can't wait for the next chapter! I am excited to see what happens next!
person Gwyllion
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You will notice a huge bounce in my step when going to work today after reading this. Seriously....I'm GIDDY with happiness! Thank you thank YOU so much for continuing it. I've had this fic bookmarked and hoped/ wished/ PRAYED so hard to see an update, and lo and behold! You made my day. You'r Itachi is so hot here! I WANT HIM!

Mind if I pimp this baby in my journal over at YG? Cuz you know my love for Naruto having kids are immense!!!! <3<3<3