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for Parent Trap

by BishounenKrazed

person ZeroZoey
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter, sooooooo glad you are back, kinda worried that you stopped writing this story. So very happy you are back, please update soon.
person Rachel
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more! *explodes* Gah, I read this all now, and I just about died when it cut off with only just a hint, a tease, of some Naruto Sausuke interaction. I hope we get some next chapter, and I can't wait for it!
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Just wanted to know whether you were planning on continuing this story.
If you aren't, it would be a real pity, but hey, appart from encouraging you, what can we do.
Anyway, I hope you're fine, and that you're planning on continuing this story...
An avid reader, waiting for more...
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking great so far. I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to meet though, I bet they hate each other :)
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story so far. cant wait for more.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A new chapter!
I hope you're okay... Sugery? Harsh...
I love Kakashi. He's awesome. And Itachi seems like he's going to be fun too.
And the kids are so cute... What exactly did they set fire to? And HOW?
Anyway, I'm really glad that you plan to continue this story. For a moment there, I got scared.
Well, Can't wait until the next chapter. Please tell me that Sasuke and Naruto meet in that one!
XD LANE
person Allys
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! An Update *glomps and huggles u* I'm so sorry to hear about school and surgery being bitches! I hope that clears up soon (both of them). And I didn't think the chapter was boring at all XD. It was actually quite sweet and nice. I love that Naruto was ready to tell off Itachi and that Kei, cause I'm sure it was him and not Touya, set the table on FIRE!! XD *snickers* What a beautiful first impression of the Uchiha children. And Umm... Did Itachi just say Naruto was smexy XD *waggles eyebrows* LOL. How fun, is he going to play matchmaker?? *snickers* I doubt it, especially after he realised Naruto had something to do with June. *Loves on you*. This made me very happy to read and I hope you can find more time to write *huggles*. sending you good and clear vibes for school adn health issues *Does Maka's dad's sending good vibes dance*. And if you have no idea who Maka is ... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGeVKBqznvw *face fault*.
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
totally awesome story so far...cant wait to see what happens...update soon ok....PLEASE!!!!!
person Dragon
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person hanyou
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow darling. it's so good to see you writing again. i know that things have been kind of hard for you, and i know that things have been hectic, but i'm so glad that you are able to take a few minutes out to actually write a little bit love. *loves on you*

now, to the fic: *fangirl squeal* it's so cute! i love the way naruto is with ayame, the way he interacts with all of the other people. i like the way you write naruto. he's so innocent and sweet, but hard and tough at the same time. he's awesome, and he does a great job. i love the way he works with ayame, and how he's such an awesome parent. i can't wait to find out more about ayame's mother, but i love the way june takes care of things with him.

and ohs... do i detect a hint of jealousy with itachi in regards to the delightful june? i do believe so... now, now itachi-san! no need to be so jealous! and i would love to see more of the gaara/naruto thing fleshed out. it makes me happy to think about, but i really can't wait for the naruto/sasuke action. it's guaranteed to be good.

now... curiously... how does the uchiha boys look familiar to naruto but not itachi? *maybe i forgot something... wouldn't be the first time*

wonderful fic darling. beautifully done and spectacular as all of your work always is. i look forward to more, and i hope that things calm down a bit for you, if only to give you a chance to breathe.

*loves naughtily*