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I hope to see more soon. I can't wait to see what happens when Sasuke meets Naruto. Good work so far.

I love this so far. I can't believe you had a new fic and I missed it. I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to meet :)

I liked it a lot. You just sort of lost me with the June connection for a moment but then I was like "Ohhhhh!" Good story. Please write more I want to see what happens next.

its cute. though i kinda confused, is naruto ayame's dad? my japanese slang isn't all that good and she called him tou-san, does that mean dad?

Just wanted to let you know my keyboard's all slimy from my drooling. My inner fangirl never scream so hard either when I saw this update! THANK YOU! And how riggin' ADORABLE is Ayame?! She totally reminds me of a younger naruto...that little babycakes. Seriously...you don't need to hear this from me in every comment, but I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH HOMGWTFBBQ! June's a pretty interesting character so far and I'm kind of glad to read more of her BG. The ending suprised me a bit...but all will be forgiven. When Sasuke meets up with our Naruto of course! ;)

Great chapter!
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The better question is: why not Gaara? Gaara is fucking hot. =^^= (Plus, you know, he and Naruto can relate to one enough for whatever the reason, no matter how AU a story can be... but thats not import right now. The important thing is that Gaara is hot! *ahem) hehe

Keep up the good work. ^^

*dodges desk*

yay! we finally get to meet naruto! this makes me happy. *love for naruto* and i'm really glad that he's not dating gaara anymore, that way the door's open for sasuke. :>

and ahs. now we know why june acted the way she did. although i suppose that's an appropriate reaction when dealing with somebody as arrogant as an uchiha. when naruto meets sasuke, is he going to end up throwing things?

it was nice to get to know june a little bit. and shame on her for breaking naruto's heart. although, i guess it's okay because she's still hurt. but itachi's going to make it all better for her, ne? i really like her though. she's cute. and i love how girlish she was before she went to see naruto. it was quite appropriate. because who can ever forget those dazzling baby blues?

and... and... ayame! oh lordy she is adorable. i'm all like... mini-naruto! complete with a naruto-esque outfit. that makes it so much more fun! and what she said about her mother! shame on sakura for teaching her that! (and i certainly hope that your sakura-hate doesn't spill over into this! unless it's supposed to be...) but ayame is so cute! and kei! and touya! *loves them* i think these are among my favorite oc's created, just for the sheer adorableness of them. and i get a feeling they are going to be quite manipulative when it comes to getting their fathers together.

another great chapter, nomme-kami-sama!

“Hey, Ayame-chan!” June and Ayame both turned to the voice, blinking their eyes when they saw Kei nearly falling out of his chair, hand waving back and forth. “You can be our friend! We don’t have a mom, either!”

Dude!! That was so cute! I loved it! 'was so funny too!

-Damp

This story is really awesome! I can't wait to read more! Whoever Ayame's mother is, she must have hurt Naruto a lot for Sakura to say something so nasty about her. I'm usually not into OC characters unless they are kids, but I really like June, she is pretty awesome. She must have a huge heart to be willing to break her own heart in order to see Naruto happy even if it's not with her.