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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! *Big wet sparkly teary eyes*. June is all in love with Naruto and he doesn't love her back... She's now automatically forgiven for EVERYTHING!!!. I Love Naruto!! And anybody else who loves Naruto is a winner in my book. Poor Lady. I love that he called her Junebug. And she helped Kei!!!! And Touya held his hand!! *Dies of overdose of Uchiha cuteness*. Okay, okay so I really like June. And LOL, okay Doctor's are people too XD. She's very allowed to have her pissy moments. And Jeez Louise Sakura!!! Potty mouth much!! I mean I can cuss with the best of them, but not in front of the babies!! The absolutely adorable orange clad ninja babies *squees like an idiot*. Ayame is so CUTE!!! And Kei!! (AGAIN) - "You can be our friend, we don't have a mommy either!" *Glomps them ALL and you too ;)!!!* I'm so freaking excited!!! And GAARA!!! LOL *Loves all over the head of Suna mafia and then runs for my life*. Naruto would go out with damn gangster. *Shakes head* I can't wait for Naruto's point of view!!! He's so my favourite!! *Huggles you to bits* Thank you so much for the update honey!!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aiiiee!!
moar! moar!! Moar!!!
Darling, this story is just pure, unadultered wunderlove! I'm sooo excited for it. I just read all three chapters and can't wait for the next installment. I'm loving the intrigue and the setup and oooh! i can't wait to see the ItaJune thing XD lolol.
And the kids are OMG, adorable! Just WIN! hee hee. I'm loving it to no end!
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moar! moar!! Moar!!!
Darling, this story is just pure, unadultered wunderlove! I'm sooo excited for it. I just read all three chapters and can't wait for the next installment. I'm loving the intrigue and the setup and oooh! i can't wait to see the ItaJune thing XD lolol.
And the kids are OMG, adorable! Just WIN! hee hee. I'm loving it to no end!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*huggles this chapter*
too cute! far too cute to be legal, i think. it's adorable, ridiculously adorable, and i love it!
i don't really have much to say except that i love that sasuke and itachi are marginally polite to each other, even though it's really rather obvious they don't like each other. you've managed to keep their relationship from degenerating into constant battles or overtly friendly brotherly love while managing to maintain the very delicate balance that comes with having a sibling you can't really stand but are reluctant to admit you love kind of thing. (if any of that makes sense to you, *cookies*)
i love the twins and i love sasuke's relationship with them. and i love the glimpse at sasuke and his boys from itachi's pov. it gives it a different feel, and you can sense the pride that itachi has in his little brother for stepping up so spectacularly to be a wonderful father to his kids. it makes it sweet! and i love it! and the fact that itachi's actually looking forward to torturing the twins when they get older... although i can kind of see why... mini sasuke's and all.
does the doc know naruto? because that would be a wonderful response to anything annoying the blond may have said, i think... <_< and the twins are getting a new teacher that isn't iruka (although, how sweet of itachi to remember him!)? interesting... *curious*
this is shaping up to be a highly interesting story. and now, i know i'll need to check aff more often to see how this story is progressing. *feels bad i'm so behind*
too cute! far too cute to be legal, i think. it's adorable, ridiculously adorable, and i love it!
i don't really have much to say except that i love that sasuke and itachi are marginally polite to each other, even though it's really rather obvious they don't like each other. you've managed to keep their relationship from degenerating into constant battles or overtly friendly brotherly love while managing to maintain the very delicate balance that comes with having a sibling you can't really stand but are reluctant to admit you love kind of thing. (if any of that makes sense to you, *cookies*)
i love the twins and i love sasuke's relationship with them. and i love the glimpse at sasuke and his boys from itachi's pov. it gives it a different feel, and you can sense the pride that itachi has in his little brother for stepping up so spectacularly to be a wonderful father to his kids. it makes it sweet! and i love it! and the fact that itachi's actually looking forward to torturing the twins when they get older... although i can kind of see why... mini sasuke's and all.
does the doc know naruto? because that would be a wonderful response to anything annoying the blond may have said, i think... <_< and the twins are getting a new teacher that isn't iruka (although, how sweet of itachi to remember him!)? interesting... *curious*
this is shaping up to be a highly interesting story. and now, i know i'll need to check aff more often to see how this story is progressing. *feels bad i'm so behind*
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story so far. Cant wait for more.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAAAHHHHHHH! ILU! <3 You always write my favorite kind of writings and it's so SO hard to find them now. I kind of like your Itachi here. Sure, he's a bastard outside, but when it comes to his thoughts on his brother and nephews, they're the sweetest things unimaginable. Diedara's cute here as his assistant. Lol! You can tell he's been working for Itachi for a while to make comeback answers like that. I seriously CAN"T WAIT till Sasuke meets Naruto. And I really hope nothing is wrong on Itachi's episodes. It's nice to finally read about him and having a certain moment of weakness. It makes his character all the more stronger and believable. Thanks so much for sharing! <3<3<3
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I HATE AFF FOR CUTTING OFF MY REVIEW.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!!! That's a really good Itachi. I like him. I hope you have more of Sasuke and the kids next chapter though. That would be really nice. And metting Naruto. That's sure to be fu-un.
Anyway, great chapter and keep going!!
I'm gonna love this story.
XD LANE
Anyway, great chapter and keep going!!
I'm gonna love this story.
XD LANE
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am lovin this story I can't wait for more chapters !!!! Keep up the good work !!!! Sasuke & Itachi rocks in this story.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapters! Very interesting.
I love that this story is actually taking its time in developing and not rushing. You get to see more of the characters personalities. But where is Naruto? I love the descriptions and the characters so far. The plot definitely seems good and intriguing.
Please please update soon :)
I love that this story is actually taking its time in developing and not rushing. You get to see more of the characters personalities. But where is Naruto? I love the descriptions and the characters so far. The plot definitely seems good and intriguing.
Please please update soon :)
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...(but that wasn’t so important because girls are icky, Kei made sure to tell him), his encounter with a very pretty lady that he wanted to be his wife (see, pretty ladies are different from girls because they’re pretty and give him kisses for his owies, and are therefore not icky)...
That was a very funny and typical boy response! I loved how Kei said that! So funny...
-Damp
That was a very funny and typical boy response! I loved how Kei said that! So funny...
-Damp