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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kushina is so clueless here and minato is such a push over, poor naruto. Hope his name gets clear soon and wonder how the concil would use him as a anbu now? since minato is hokage he gets to know right?...
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I bet I know who Snake and Raven are. :P It's awesome so far!! I'm in suspense for the next chapter!! :D
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH my goodness! Who is that Sasuke had confessed to?! and Naruto is in the clutches of that devious Danzo! This is all getting exciting. Can;t wait to see how everyone reacts to this! more pls~~~~~ thanks for updating
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so great! But I hate the whole "Better to love and lost then to never love at all" that bullshit from hell. But whatever, keep up the good and I might bake you a cake if you update in a reasonable time frame.
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...well Zabuza was, but in all honesty he was a pussy cat with the influence of Haku. Zabuza had mellowed drastically when compared to his former state, and the teen had gained an inner strength from him in turn. They fit each other." I love that part... it's so true! Haku and Zabuza! T_T
*cries* I HATE GOODBYES! Little Inari and his big brother Naru... *sniffs* Whoa, and I actually felt bad for Sakura, poor girl. *hisses* BOO! MINATO, FAKE TEARS MEAN NOTHING! >_> Um, you aren't gonna make this SasuNaru or NaruSasu are you?! I sure hope not! That would ruin it~!
Yes, well... once again, AMAZING CHAPTER, C-Chan! ^_^ I look forward to reading more~ :)
*cries* I HATE GOODBYES! Little Inari and his big brother Naru... *sniffs* Whoa, and I actually felt bad for Sakura, poor girl. *hisses* BOO! MINATO, FAKE TEARS MEAN NOTHING! >_> Um, you aren't gonna make this SasuNaru or NaruSasu are you?! I sure hope not! That would ruin it~!
Yes, well... once again, AMAZING CHAPTER, C-Chan! ^_^ I look forward to reading more~ :)
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Conscience: Awwww...
Me: -Barf-"
hahaha^^
Should I find it creepy that you would be okay with a Jiraiya-like person as your grandfather or lover??! Hehe... though I know what you mean.
Damn Naruto! Always sacrificing himself for his precious people. How long will it be till Kakashi find out that Naruto is in Root?
Great chapter!
update!
Me: -Barf-"
hahaha^^
Should I find it creepy that you would be okay with a Jiraiya-like person as your grandfather or lover??! Hehe... though I know what you mean.
Damn Naruto! Always sacrificing himself for his precious people. How long will it be till Kakashi find out that Naruto is in Root?
Great chapter!
update!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! i'm looking forward to the next chapter so please update soon ^^
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written story. I love the changes you made to the story from the original. I know its a kaka/Naru fic but I'm interested to see what you do with Sasuke as well. Ive put it on my favorites list and will check regularly for updates. I wish I could see more guys reading this stuff as I am a gay guy who enjoys it but eh whatever. I'm happy to find such a wonderful story on this awesome website.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think the way you make Naruto out is different and wonderful.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting juicier each chapter. I must say if you keep this up I might actually fall in love with you. But I'm not putting any pressure on you or anything. I know you have a busy life, I just hope you will update sooner. TTFN!