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sweet story! Poor naruto, wonder would his name ever clear? looking forward to read what happens next~

That was an awesome take on the mission to the land of Waves!
I love the depth of emotion coming from Naruto. I think that is what makes this story good; real plausible emotion with your own creative twist on it.
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Sorry for saying this but I just have to: I LOVE IT!
But besides I will add something else to this comment that I hope will help the writing. I think you did a really good job with all the mision on waves, and I think you got to make something diferent(like you said you wanted to) because even though it is similar to some this was completely different, especially in the fact that it was the villagers who killed gatou.I think that's somenthing I've never read before.
And I just LOVE kakashi's and naruto's realtionship! I can't wait to see it grow eveen more! I think that's what I'm looking forward the most! Well that and seeing more and more of naruto's personality!
Also I have a curiosity that Im not too sure about: is Raven Itachi? Or if someone else, then who?? Well maybe you wont tell me this because it will come later on, but Im just curius!
Ahahah Anyway I really liked this chapter, and here you have SOME of my mind. If I were to try and put more I think I would just start ranting, so.... I will be looking forward for your next chapter

wow! great fic and very original (well as far as i know anyways)! great interactions between characters and i love how though everyone (ok-not *everyone*) has their negative aspects, they're all pretty much good(not really mean or evil). i can't wait for more =D

I must say I'm quite impressed with this fic. It's truly original in it its context. Anyway, I can't wait for your next update, whenever that may be. Until then. Ja ne.

i just found this fic and i am totally in love with it! i think that the whole thing about naruto and his brother closely resembles what hinata and hanabi have in the real series... i hope they finally find out about the council but that seems a long way off for now... plus i am such a haku fan so im glad he isnt dead in this one! yay! i'll be waiting for the next update! this fic falls under my top 10 faves of all time! good luck with your writing!

Yaaaaaaaay I love love love this story!!!! I hope you can write another chapter soon!!! Im really curius I can't wait to see kakashi's and naruto's relationship develop!
Also I think it is amazing how you got to make naruto smarterand more reserved without really changing his personality! I think it is a great accomplishment!Because sometimes his whole personality change (not that that's something bad because I like those fics too, but it is still amazing how you changed while at the same time you didn't!)
Please write soon!!!!!

Please tell me someone gonna give naruto's father a talking too! And a butt kicking. Okay that off my chest i really like this fic, and can't wait to see more!

ooooo, I really really like this story. XD It's really good. And I just want to hug Naruto. Looking forward to the next chapter. ^^

Great chapter!
ZabuHaku isn't weird... it's actually pretty cute! I love Haku!
I feel for chibi Naruto...
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