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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just a small thank you.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hate the Hokage now. Poor Naruto even though in this story he has his dad, he's still alone.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is crazy good!
update!
update!
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeals rants and raves*
you handed naruto over to haku and zabuza??? not right!!
oh, and i have to say, i like the little twists in the story that you're making different- leaving naruto's parents alive, etc. i can't wait to see what you have planned next. this is very good and interesting and i want more!!!
you handed naruto over to haku and zabuza??? not right!!
oh, and i have to say, i like the little twists in the story that you're making different- leaving naruto's parents alive, etc. i can't wait to see what you have planned next. this is very good and interesting and i want more!!!
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool i hope you update soon
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Violent reactions are only for when you do a bad job, and you did a beautiful job. Thank you for the A/N in the beginning, I'm happy. I hope you update in a reasonable time frame.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG LOVE IT!!!!!!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I beg of you not to give in to readers who want Minato to be evil. You had the right idea. You seem to be an original writer and for your sake I hope you stay that way. So please keep Minato a misguided but loving parent. There are too many stories out there that lack creativity and I don't want to see a great story like these to end up like the others. Remember you write for you, you just let others read it. Thank you and stay beautiful.
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its good um are u planning on making naruto evil
and no the hokage is nicer i quess but still scum
and i like the paert were u made sakura have a brian and some sense cause she's never had them before
and no the hokage is nicer i quess but still scum
and i like the paert were u made sakura have a brian and some sense cause she's never had them before
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What Minato did to Naruto is a big betrayal. I don't think he should even call him dad to show him that he doesn't respect him anymore. I don't want Minato to be the bad guy but I want him to feel some pain for turning his back on Naruto. Naruto should show him.
I love the story but I would have loved it more if this was a ItaNaru. Especially w/ Sasuke obsessing over his brother like that.
I love the story but I would have loved it more if this was a ItaNaru. Especially w/ Sasuke obsessing over his brother like that.