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for Father Figure

by CassandraIncognito

person Dee
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An idiot yes, scum no. I have see what happens when an older sibling hurts a younger sibling, but when the parent is not there to see the action he/she will most of the time listen to all sides. Minto did not really listen he bought in to the crowd. That is what most parents will tell you is the worst thing to do. Quoting my mom "Listen what others say but not to buy it right away. Think for one day or two."
person iie_LuBbyooh_iie
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
luv it! ^.^
person Animecrazii*
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I think this is the best story I have ever read in my entire life!

Naru-chan's parents don't believe him so sad......:[

Kay well Ja Ne!
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that has such an amazing plot i cant wait to read the second chapter your and amazing writer to be able to do that
person a kitsunes light
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this story IS original! And I really like it!!! I think that maybe wolf is kakashi and snake is anko? Well, it is just a guess.
Please don't turn naru into a weapon!!!!
Well I don't have much more to ask of you, only that: PLEEEEEEASEEEEE WRITE SOON THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
person Sara! (move_them_hands)
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PERFECT!

And yesh yesh, I now finally understand the relationship between Minato and Naruto! Makes sense but goodness lady DX So sad *smacks Naruto's parents*

I can't wait to read more! The more I haven't already read XD

*dances around* Don't keep us waiting long!
person Alie
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The summary is kindda weird but the first chapter is really good.