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for Father Figure

by CassandraIncognito

person dut
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you! Ahahaha! This is a great chapter!! The Lemon was superb! It was perfect and so touching. Can;t wait for more~
person Briryan
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, loved the chapter! That Naruto is a slick one is he not. So much for Kakashi will. Looking foward to the next chapter.
person Ayame
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i liked it please make the next chapter fast :]
person Daisuke
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think its nice to see that kakashi has a sensitive side even though hes tought and strong his heart is very fragile , u are an excellent writer , if your story was a show or a movie i would watch everyday :)
person Fate-Angel
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I've been reading it and following the updates for quite a while now. The space in between updates is very long, but that's okay. Take as long as you need to make it perfect.
I'm guessing Itachi killed the council for Naruto?
Sorry I haven't reviewed before.
Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter.
=^-^=
person anessavanella
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story! boring at times....BUT it still manages (somehow) tolure me in...[anessavanella@aim.com]
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohmygogohmygodohmygodOH.MY.GOD!!!! I've just gotten to read this story yesterday(I never explore this part of the site XD), and all I can say is that everything is so frickin' amazing so far. Your quirks and writing are such an incredible combination here. I jsut forgot everything I was gonna type down XD Rest assured, it was just repeating all the OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT HAPPENED1!!eleven!!! moments and how they were really, really good. Yup, I can't imagine who killed the council XD I was thinking 'holy crap!' and then...ya XD So...Naru, please have your crazy hot monkey smex with Kakashi-babe now σAσ If not for having peace with yourself, then for the sanity of the readers XD (Not like I'm only reading the story for the smex, it's just an awesome bonus).

Thanks!!!
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a heavy chapter but good :D
I wonder what will happen once Kakashi finds out about this ...
person qwerty
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing new chapter! I really love this story. Please continue (with faster updates ^^)
Keep going!
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT, OMG TOTALLY AWESOME CHAPTER!!

It wasn't that heavy, I was expecting like angstgalor or something....I guess I write rape and angst too much for it to have been too heavy for me...but still pretty 'WTF?!'

As soon as they were in suna I figured who it would be. YAY GAARA! adorable bastard finally shows his face in this story *hearts*

Great update C-chan!