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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like alot, please update asap, you have in soooo interested!
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well damn I always like a damaged Naruto. I don't understand if he had the council killed why there still some left and why can't he get these people killed too? Oh well I just hope that you update sooner for I can see how Naruto going to rape...I mean seduce Kakashi.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I just read the whole thing straight through and I couldn't walk away. I don't even ship KakaNaru, and this is just...it's breaking my heart. I felt so sick reading chapter eleven and watching Naruto be debauched by anyone aside from Kakashi (even if it was kind of hot...>_>). I love that you're taking the plot slowly and really developing things as opposed to simply jumping into XOMG!Sexallthetime! And I absolutely adore your reinvention of the canon to fit this universe. My only criticism would be that there are occasionally some very distracting typos...but it happens, it's really nothing bad enough to make me enjoy the story any less. =D. Now if only I could figure out how to get an alert for when you update. >_> *not aff.net savvy*
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh please updat when you can, I have a new found love of KakaNaru because of this story!
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lemons with plots the best type.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story was very good i would love to read the rest of it
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!I really like your fic!Hope you update soon.It's kinda the first fic of Kakshi and Naruto with a great plot!
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sweet story! I hate Minato in this!!! I normally love him, but you've changed my mind (at least in this story.) I feel sorry for Naruto's little brother, though. Yoshi, isn't it? The poor thing has no idea what's going on!
And is Sasuke's mysterious lover Itachi?!??! I hope so!! I luuurve that pairing! ;) I can't really think of who else it would be in this fic, actually...
And, speaking of Itachi, when is he going to grow a pair and speak up about the kunai he found? Grr..
Poor Naruto! You've written this so well. I just love it. I hope to see more very soon! XD I can't wait to see how Naruto's mission goes. XD I hope he gets to save himself for Kakashi. That would be so sweet!
Anyway, sorry to ramble. I love your story. Please update soon. XD
And is Sasuke's mysterious lover Itachi?!??! I hope so!! I luuurve that pairing! ;) I can't really think of who else it would be in this fic, actually...
And, speaking of Itachi, when is he going to grow a pair and speak up about the kunai he found? Grr..
Poor Naruto! You've written this so well. I just love it. I hope to see more very soon! XD I can't wait to see how Naruto's mission goes. XD I hope he gets to save himself for Kakashi. That would be so sweet!
Anyway, sorry to ramble. I love your story. Please update soon. XD
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh!!! the smut is yummy!!! (even though its not actual sex, its still sooo hot!) i can't wait for you to update again!! and for more kaka/naru action, the way you write it is sooo sweet! mou! ;)
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update, can't wait for the next one.
Keep up the good work!
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Keep up the good work!
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