rate_review Reviews

I just read all chapters of this story. Started it last night, and I just got to the latest chapter. To be honest, I really didn't get into the first few chapters. I just didn't recognize Naruto as being Naruto and it turned me off. But the portrayal of him has slowly changed into the sweet boy that I know and love. I'm really enjoying the story now.

I like that it was Idate and Aoi that sexed Naruto up. There's something very delicious about sex with people who aren't the main love interest. Builds up the anticipation. Who is Naruto going to have to 'distract' on his mission? And will this stranger get to have Naruto before Kakashi does? Personally, I'd love the bitter-sweetness of Naruot's first time being with a stranger.

This chapter was full of a lot more than nothing. In fact, this chapter was the one I most enjoyed! It was probably the mix of character development, intrigue, and descriptive lemon (puckered holes always turn me on, especially when they're being played with). I'm hoping to see Naruto fall deeper into this cage that Danzo in building around him. And I also expect that Naruto might be more than Danzo can handle. I'm also hoping that Ibiki might find out that his little brother is still alive, and practically a captive. (But I hope he doesn't find out too quickly. Prolong the torture for the enjoyment for the audience.)

I really loving this story, and I'm looking forward to what happens next. ^_^

I love the way the story is going, but did you have to leave off right when Naruto said he is the reason they were killed? My brain comes up with the worst case senerio, that is never true,so i can never trust my brain. Sad, i know. Can't wait for the next update.

that was the best non-sex i've read. i can't wait until kakashi comes back into the story!!! loooooove it

omg idate i love you so much right now! omg i am loving this fic!

um...yeah. what the hell? how did a ten-year-old have the entire council kil- even as i'm asking this i keep thinking that's it's naruto so duh. anyway, what the hell, man? i've never liked danzou, the old fuck should curl up and die already, the team seven interactions you've written are so sweet and adorable i love them, kakashi's acting like a...shit i don't even know, why the HELL did you write it so that i can't stand the family naruto has (god, i just want to punch minato cause you've written him as some naive innocent twit and even from the litle on him i gleaned from the manga i know he isn't that), and i know who raven is! jesus, that was a mouthful. welp, sasu-kisama is in love with his nii-san again. oooo....maybe i'm wrong. hn. anyway, i kept getting confused as hell over chapter eleven and i read it twice. okay, i skimmed it the first time but still. my point remains valid. i'm confused and intrgued and pissed and i want danzou to die and i don't really think it was necessary to smut up naruto before throwing him to the Wolf (like my pun? heh), cause if he's as smart as you've written him and reads as much as you've written him, he could probably store the kama sutra in his adorableness blond noggin. what a surprise that would be for kakashi! well, before my brain crashes completely, i'd just like to give you a sharp nudge into getting to the next installment. i'd also like for danzou to die *smile*. well, love and and many blessings. ja ne. Meli-chan.

I like this story and the twists, but I have to confess, only KakaNaru smut amkes me happy!

I really liked this chpater! And I really liked your version of idate, also I think it was a good idea not to taint naru too mcuh and at the same time give him experience, poor kakashi he will be shocked when naruto starts seducing him that's or sure! eheh
I hope to read more from you soon!

OH DAMN! That was a good chapter, yes yes!

Aww, I must say I doubted how Idate and Aoi would fit in here but I should remember to remember that you can never fail at any idea you come up with! XD

X3 Idate is so adorable, hopefully he'll have a happy ending or will at least die.

*dances around* I look forward to your update!!

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next chapter.

That was great. Even though my vote ended up losing I still enjoy giving out the secret at the end...I don't remember enough of the details in the story to say if I had guessed any kind of secret like that though. Thanks for updating. Your a fantastic writer. And the smut made me feel all giddy inside more then horny. good stuff though