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for Father Figure

by CassandraIncognito

schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm a guy which makes my vote even wierder. (Since I'm leaving multiple reviews Im going to vote secret again)
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But I have to say that I have enough smut stories to get me through that asking for a secret on one isnt goning to kill me (voting secret again BTW)
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I also have to say I'm a very big Kakashi fan and seeing him slowly fall for Naruto is something that makes me all gooey inside (Voting secret one more time on this review)
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I very much look forward to all the little plot twists you changes versus the original storyline (Such as Naruto's parents and Zabuza and Haku surviving) (Voting Secret again)
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing and I cant wait to see where you take the rest of the characters either. (Voting ......you guessed it. Secret again!)
person Jena
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sad. It almost makes me want Naruto to turn into the Kyuubi & kills everybody. The Hokage (I don't even want to call him Naruto's father) the last for letting something like that happen to his son. There is only so much someone can just let go. He's allowing people to abuse his son. What kind of a father is he. If he'd put a stop to that right before it even started, Naruto wouldn't be suffering.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg as soon as you started talking about all the foods naruto could smell at the festival i knew something was going to go down-- i just felt this tightening in my chest-- thats what i love most about this story- the way you write is so perfect that as soon as i start reading my heart just feels like its in someones grip and i LOVE IT!!!! not many people can do it and within 2 sentences of this story i can barely breathe-- you are honestly one of the best writers ive read in quite a while-- plus you have no idea how excited i was to read this chapter-- when i saw there was an update this humungous smile stretched across my face!! XD XOXOXOXOX
person Akina
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. I loved it C-Chan! Thank you so much! THAT'S RIGHT! I'M THE BIRTHDAY GIRL, EVERYONE~! CHYEAH! You know what I find hilarious? My favorite part of the story, wasn't even the story... it was "- - - - - - - Hello... I am an unoriginal line that separates present time from flash back because the author still hasn’t figured out a way to slowly slide into a flashback.... I wish you a good day - - - - - - - - - - - - - - " LMAO. You amaze me everytime, love... keep it up! ^_^ *loves on*
person qwerty
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I'm glad that Kakashi and Naruto made up... sort of.
update!
person a kitsunes light
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I REEEEEEAAAAAAAAALLY liked this chapter!!! It had a little bit of everything: friendship, romance, and angst... I will be looking forward for the next chapter!!
ANd it doesn't matter if takes long as long as you update it someday! Because it is certainly worth the wait!