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for Father Figure

by CassandraIncognito

person Xoteem
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg yay! I like this chapter. :D
I vote secret. :)
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me laugh in so many different places XD I love you. Loathe the villagers and the whole time I wished Naruto could control their mind and break them. BWAHAHAHHA.

But yes, wonderful update! Well worth the wait however long it did or didn't take you to write this XD

POWER TO THE C-CHAN!
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww dat was sweet cant wait tillthe next chapter
person Briryan
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderfull chapter! Yay, they finally had a kiss. Is it possible to vote for both? Smex and a secret? Cause that is my vote. I was wonder if you could let me know when you put up the next chapter? Thank you. Looking forward to finding out what happens next? Oh, before I forget. Are you planning on letting us know who Sasuke was talking to? I am just wondering how far off my guess is.
person Fate-Angel
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter.
KakaNaru!!! XD

Fate-Angel
=^-^=
person Kuno
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was great to see another update. :) I'm really enjoying this story.

The imagery of Naruto broken in the street... *sniffles*

I'm glad that you gave Naruto a happy birthday after all, and that Kakashi may have finally come to his senses.
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is great so far. i cant wait for more. your a teriffic writer. keep up the good work
person Mija
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ive just found this and I have to say please please write more or am I too late?? it seems like forever that anyones actually updated any KakaNaru fics on the Naruto section, but I like the overall story even if I am a SasuNaru fan I soo want to find out what is going on,,,,hope there is an udadate or is it too late???? ty for the awesome read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person qwerty
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love the interaction between Raven and Naruto. You showed a lot emotionally in one scene.
Don't worry about RL; just try to keep your head above water.
person luvsjazz
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've never read the take you have on why Kakashi wears his mask. It's an incredibly cool concept, him having not yet "earned his face". Much more meaningful than "I put it on and just, you know, kept it on".

Good job. I'll keep my eye out for updates.