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AWWWWW! This was a fabulous chapter! It wasn't a filler at all, I think it was most certainly needed.

As always your writing is perfect. I even felt butterflies fluttering whenever Kakashi and Naruto kiss.

Thanks for the great chapter C-chan! I can't wait for the next one!

god! i love this story!!! i seriously checked it everday to see if there was an update-- you have no idea how happy i was when i saw a new chapter was posted!!!

I don't normally read fics that have a lot of chapters in them for fear of them not being finished and putting all that time into reading them, but Damn! I'm glad I put the time into this one cause Kakashi and Naruto is my fav. pairing in Naruto and this story rocks! So needless to say I'm hooked and can't wait to see what happenes next. Keep up the awesome work. :D

Who are you pairing Sasuke with? Just knowing that it is not Naruto makes me want to stop reading. I hate it when he is not paired up with Naruto.

i am in absolute love with this story! i have never been happier than when i came across it XD i admit when i first saw i was a little wary of reading it but geez! am i glad i did!! it is so brilliantly written and such an amazing plot!!-- i read the entire thing in one night and cried like a 5-year-old girl when naruto did all those selfless things for those he cared for and when he spoke about his past-- i hate that his parents dont treat him as they should but i can see that they arent mean, they just done understand-- and i was absolutely diggin that last update X3 that kabuza/haku lemon you snuck in there was quite delectable-- i cannot wait to see what happens next in this sad and intricate turn of events your mind has so deliciously prpared for us XD thanks for writing what may be the best story i have read in quite a long time OXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO {{{oh yeah those are all for you ;D

That was so beautiful - from Kakashi's story to the kiss. I love how much depth you gave Kakashi. Many fanfictions don't seem to bother with his past and the effects it has had on him. Other times, the author will apparently forget the role his father played and focus only on Obito's influence.
Your description of Kakashi's and Naruto's feelings, as they shared their first kiss, had me fighting back a tear from some unnamed emotion your writing invoked within me. Just beautiful.
Sakura's introduction, and acceptance, for yaoi had me releasing a fangirl shout of my own. Vey amusing. Thanks for the chapter!

Awesome chapter!
Loved the ZabuHaku lemon. I just love that pairing in general!
update!

oh god you and your authors notes XDDDDD

The KakaNaru part makes a person really pay attention. Damn you are GREAT at building tension *chuckles*

Love the chapter <3

MOAR!!!!!!!!!! I DEMAND MOAR!!!

*cries and clings to your leg* why oh why did I ignore this story for so long, even when you talk about it everyday and offer up previews and stuff!

This story is amazing...at first I didn't really wanta read it cause honestly I'm not much of a KakaNaru fan I'm secretly a SasuNaru fan...but now that I read this, their interactions the way they fit into each other without seeming fake its just all too perfect and I can't wait for the two of them to fall in love ;-;

You write Haku and Zabuza the way they should be written, they are just too amazing...and to be honest once more that is also another reason I didn't want to read this. All the stories I have read before have a retarded explaination for why Haku and Zabuza live and are together as lovers and it makes the story dull. But you...you my dear C-chan have managed to make them original and interesting and I find myself wanting them to be in the story more and more...especially Zabuza pissing Sasuke off XDDDD priceless.

SQUEE!! Sasuke gets himself someone <3 I'm pretty sure I know who it is and even if I'm wrong I don't care, its just too cute XD

I love how the story is based on the anima/manga yet has its own path completely...god this story is just too original and amazing to ignore and not love.

To think that even for a few days I doubted your amazing skills as a writer...I am ashamed of myself. This story is freaking better then gold. Its like finding a rose in a weed garden.

If you don't keep up with the steady amount of updates that you have been giving, I think I will kill myself just to haunt you...and if there is no such thing as ghosts at least my death will haunt you and you'll have to update just to appease your feelings of guilt. BWAHAHAHAHHA

Thanks so much for the amazing story!

x.x i just realized this after coming back but my review got cut off...there was more to it but i can't remember what it was now....I just know I ranted more about how amazing your story it is *sighs*

stupid aff review box eating reviews.

sorry for wasting up another review ;-;