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by DevilnBlue

schedule August 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was odd but keep going the story is pretty interesting.

schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OOH! I like where this is going!
Will there be more?
Oh I hope there will be more soon!~

person Jorge
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter please keep updating please!!!! I have to say I'm addicted to this story now
person lonelylulaby
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I would greatly appreciate if you would update this story please. I really like it and want to know more of what is to come from Itachi to Naruto
person Ty
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm entranced by this story. Not only do I like the needy, dependent Naruto who laps up any attention he is given, I'm loving the both heartless and merciful Itachi. I'm intrigued by how Itachi is so confused about whether he wants to see Naruto broken before him or if he wants to keep him as a pet. I also like this because it's how Itachi sees things and you put alot of thought into his emotions and most other just tend to make him bland, boring, and too stoic to connect with. I'm truly interested in knowing how the story progresses and am looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
person mercynre
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cute story (am I twisted for thinking that?) and I want to read the rest of it. Poor Naruto... and it's so interesting to see Itachi from a new point of view, since so little is really said about him in the anime other than facts. I like that you explore the way he thinks and the things that make him who he is rather than just the actions; it's something I wish would happen in the show. And it was very cute and canon the way that Sasuke and Naruto checked each other out when they met, as if they were always meant to compete.
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very fascinating chapter I kind of enjoy that Itachi is on a team with more women than men and how Anko is with him. It's very fun. It's a very fascinating chapter in terms Of Sasuke and Naruto interacting as well. The quotes at the beginning of the chapters also are fascinating and good quotes it's interesting to see where this story is going keep up the good work.
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Its back!!

I love this story and I'm glad to see it updating again. I love Sasuke's confrontation of Naruto.
Keep up the great work!
person Lack_Honesty
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What interests me most from this fic is Itachi's inner struggle of wanting to break Naruto though he can't help but feel some sort of guilt for it, that feeling of wanting to know how far he can go causing pain for the sheer pleasure of it, yearning for those tears only to be able to give comfort, poor Itachi needs to reconsider his actions before he does something he can't undo. I just love how Naruto takes his position as pet, his fear of being eventually abandoned by Itachi makes me wonder how far he will go to ensure a little affection from his master, could he eventually attack others under the idea that they potentially endanger his link with Itachi (like Sasuke and his agreement of sorts to share his aniki), I think he will eventually stand up to others, maybe he will even develop a sick attachment to Itachi a possessiveness that will make him view others as rivals or something. Now, the way in which Itachi finally finds out the truth about Naruto is very unexpected, though I don’t know if he will remember after all the alcohol, fortunately he has Naruto to watch over him in his hang over. I wish to read more about the interaction of Itachi and his team, and the eventual baby-sitting done by Kakashi when Itachi's on a mission, I can just picture the way Itachi reconsiders leaving impressionable Naruto with porn reading Kakashi when faced with a series of questions about that orange book he carries around.
person Elin
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome!

Don't take it away! It's interesting to read something so well-written and something that isn't all mush or unrealistic drama. I like Itachi's dark side, and I'm looking forward to see how this continues!