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for Broken

by DevilnBlue

schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for another good chapter, i cant believe you got Itachi drunk X0 haha!
and i cant wait to see what Sasuke's idea of greeting Itachi is, oh the suspense!
update soon please =D
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story a lot please don't take it down!?!?
person Emma345
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SUPERB! keep it up
person ZenithB
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Interesting take on the ita/naru theme. I'd like to read more.
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please keep thease storys that you created i like then and wish you would continue them.
so please dont abandon them.
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, my dear. I just want to let you know that your fics are great and I'm sorry to hear that they weren't receiving the attention the attention that they greatly deserve. Those of us that have read your stories are eagerly awaiting your next update(s). I, personally, have a book that I use to keep track of my favorite fics on this site. 4 of your fics are already in there and even though 2 of them haven't been touch in over 3 months I refuse to take them out because the story was that good.

Most of these stories I read from my phone during a lunch break and either work or school so I don't always have a chance to sit and give you a well thought out review. I could always send one that says "nice job. please update soon" but I don't think that would be as appreciated as a review that asks questions, guesses as to what's gonna happen next and really lets you know that the reader is into your fic.

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that there is somebody out there enjoying your work and would love for you to continue them. I will be posting this on every fic that I have read by you and hope that it will inspire you, if only a little bit, to feed your poor yaoi fangirls a little more. Hopefully, some of your other readers will see this review and do the same. Looking forward to your next updates, whenever that may be.

~Devious
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i notice that a didn't put a little note on the end of my review for this story. i'm looking forward to seeing their family life and itachi's reaction when he finds out about naru and it may or may not change his opinion of him.
person tszuke
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I wish you would continue!!!^^
person Toonage
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is going wonderfully. It might not be getting reviewed because the number of chapters has become stagnant so people might skip it over? Your revisions have made a big difference, keep it up!
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update :P Its a good story and as its just developing could head into many different directions^^