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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Only a threath like dropping this project could make me stop the lurking into reviewing. Therefore I beg of you to please continue this story, I wish to see how Itachi uses Naruto's powers, how he continues to defy his clan and the entire village, hopefully this wont end in the massacre of the Uchihas, mainly because it'll probaby cause a major guilt complex in Naruto, and not because of any consideration to the clan. I wish to see Naruto going to the Academy and how he adapts to his pet role, future encounters with bullying grown ups and kids alike could show the protective side of Itachi, if only to protect his posession, as a matter of pride.
I HOPE THIS IS PROOF ENOUGH OF PEOPLE PAYING ATTENTION TO YOUR WARNINGS FOR YOU TO CONTINUE THIS FANFIC, if not I could become a more obsessive fan, the stalking kind that continues to ask for updates on a weekly basis and rants endlessly, your choice.
I HOPE THIS IS PROOF ENOUGH OF PEOPLE PAYING ATTENTION TO YOUR WARNINGS FOR YOU TO CONTINUE THIS FANFIC, if not I could become a more obsessive fan, the stalking kind that continues to ask for updates on a weekly basis and rants endlessly, your choice.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! I Love This Story So Much So Far!
Please Update again. No Delete!!! 0.0
Please Update again. No Delete!!! 0.0
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO! Don't put this story on hold...or delete it...its really good...if you delete it, that would seriously suck....you've got talent.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was freaking awsome!
Can't wait to see what happens ^__^
Can't wait to see what happens ^__^
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really love this story and its so artfully done too.
I just kept thinking to myself that Sasuke's going to be so jealous and angry with Naruto once he finds out that his big brother, whom he worships and adores and is way too busy to spend time with him, will now be training the village's blonde monster instead of him. Oh the rivalry!
Keep up the great work!
I just kept thinking to myself that Sasuke's going to be so jealous and angry with Naruto once he finds out that his big brother, whom he worships and adores and is way too busy to spend time with him, will now be training the village's blonde monster instead of him. Oh the rivalry!
Keep up the great work!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story i look forward to seeing where you go with this, and i love the young kakashi *swoons*
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Another chapter! Sorry about the late review I’ve been swamped with work and I wanted to make sure that when I did review I had a full review and not a half ass one.
First I’m so excited that you updated! I thought it was going to be a lost cause to send in that review but I was thought you never know until you try and now you have updated!
Poor Sasuke he got left out while little Naruto can’t believe someone is actually stopping the villagers. With only a glare, rock on Itachi. I was a little confused on the time flow of the chapter but I think over all I understood it. So now Itachi and Naruto are living in their own house that is on the outskirts of the Uchiha villa and that is where you started was with Naruto in Itachi’s new room watching him them falling asleep. And the flash back was into the past looping around to the start of the chapter.
I love the fact that all Itachi does really is train, eat a little, and then puts up with a team for as little as possible. You also had an interesting relationship between Fugaku and Mikoto loving but not on equal levels. I wonder what Itachi is going to do when he finds out. Hmm… why did he never just ask some drunk guy?
Man I just can’t wait to see where all of this goes. I hope it turns go ok for Naruto. Oooh maybe instead of Sasuke getting hurt triggering the Kyuubi coming out it would be because of Itachi getting hurt on a mission or something.
Thank you for continuing this story! I hope you love it as much as I love to read it!!
~The Black Sand of Gara
P.S. I think you are doing a great job on showing how Itachi would be as a child.
First I’m so excited that you updated! I thought it was going to be a lost cause to send in that review but I was thought you never know until you try and now you have updated!
Poor Sasuke he got left out while little Naruto can’t believe someone is actually stopping the villagers. With only a glare, rock on Itachi. I was a little confused on the time flow of the chapter but I think over all I understood it. So now Itachi and Naruto are living in their own house that is on the outskirts of the Uchiha villa and that is where you started was with Naruto in Itachi’s new room watching him them falling asleep. And the flash back was into the past looping around to the start of the chapter.
I love the fact that all Itachi does really is train, eat a little, and then puts up with a team for as little as possible. You also had an interesting relationship between Fugaku and Mikoto loving but not on equal levels. I wonder what Itachi is going to do when he finds out. Hmm… why did he never just ask some drunk guy?
Man I just can’t wait to see where all of this goes. I hope it turns go ok for Naruto. Oooh maybe instead of Sasuke getting hurt triggering the Kyuubi coming out it would be because of Itachi getting hurt on a mission or something.
Thank you for continuing this story! I hope you love it as much as I love to read it!!
~The Black Sand of Gara
P.S. I think you are doing a great job on showing how Itachi would be as a child.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you have portrayed Itachi and can't wait till you update. What you have written so far is freakin' amazing.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really liked this chapter! Even more than the first! Because here iachi really seems to be getting more human because of naruto and is also helping him!!!!
I can't wait to read more! But what would also be really good (but I don't know if that would interfere in the plot you have in mind, sorry) would be if people like itachi's mother at least started seeing naruto as the little child that he is after sometime of seeing him everyday at itachi's side
I can't wait to read more! But what would also be really good (but I don't know if that would interfere in the plot you have in mind, sorry) would be if people like itachi's mother at least started seeing naruto as the little child that he is after sometime of seeing him everyday at itachi's side
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far i've enjoyed reading this. A very interesting take on Naruto and Sasuke.