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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind the village elders being dead. :D
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha....going to church, lovely.
Great chapter. xD
Great chapter. xD
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lmao....lmao.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. xD
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah, on the rant part.
Awesome story. :D
Awesome story. :D
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Great story. Great lemons. All good. :D
I dunno, tho. I think I love you would mean a lot to them. *shrugs*
You have some awesome writing skillz, yeah.
I dunno, tho. I think I love you would mean a lot to them. *shrugs*
You have some awesome writing skillz, yeah.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeee!!! That was great. Those kisses had my inner fangirl squealing!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! I like how cocky Sasuke is but I think he would be a bit more nervous having only had sex one time and now having it with Naruto. He would never show it, but I think he'd be a bit more... I'm not sure how to put it but off is the only way I can describe it. All in all I love it. Another good lemon, and who doesn't love handcuffs. In reaction to your authors comment I have to say I disagree. Having been an orphan his entire life, I think having someone say "I Love You" and mean it would be a great deal to Naruto. Sasuke not so much, but we're all allowed our different opinions. With your characterizations I think the possession works better. Looking forward to more updates, keep up the awesome work.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! This had to be one of the best Lemon scenes I've ever read. I love how Sasuke's inexperienced but he's still so cocky, because that's just the way that Sasuke is. And I really like the idea of Naruto being a good kisser, making Sasuke moan! This chapter was so good!! I love the way you write them. :D
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I honestly really like how the story has been going and I think that your latest lemon was amazing! I had my own shivers when Sasuke told Naruto that he wanted to fuck him!!! Took Naruto long enough to realize that only Sasuke would be able to please him in the end! It just wouldn't have worked out any other way! And I love how Sasuke kicked that chick out of their apartment! They both definitely showed a jealous side, but I think it's time for Naruto to bring forth his jealousy!!! I love this story! Can't wait for the next update!!