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for Of Birds Who Fly Free

by ArtemisSensei

person Rose
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story a lot. The lemon scene was H O T! Now that I have my fangirl out of the way, lets talk about the story. I like the idea of Naruto trying to take care of Sasuke, and I totally agree to how he would react to that. I like your writing style-its simple, clean, easy to read, and visualize. I hope you keep the good work up and I eagerly await your next update.
person Dragon7
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Raholea
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles endlessly*
now that i could see as a morning after. and nice touch with the cobra. it suited.
i definitely like your story. want to read more!!!
person gaara89
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope there's still more to go! please update soon!
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
naruto should wake up all tied up to find an amused but slightly sadistic sasuke who's ready to show his blonde sensei all he learnt *grins* go sas! tap dat ass! lol aahhh don't mind me, i'm just being mad lol