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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know you have t updated in ages but my dear friend made me read this and well i wasn't a disappointed! She knows that I love dark fics and you sure delievered! I truly hope that you one day come out of hibernation and complete this amazing twisted and fascinating story!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was like.....THE.....MOST.....EROTIC....shit I've read in a REALLY long time!!! Wow....great job....poor Sakura though....
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story and I was completely enthralled by these two chapters. They were so well written and its shortness they managed to characterize their stories so well. You've captured Sakura very well and how her love for Sasuke causes her to do "anything" for him. In turn, you accurately characterize Sasuke and how he'd view Sakura's actions. For Kabuto and Orochimaru, you captured the sexiness (at least I found Orochimaru sexy >> ) and the villainy quite well and blended the two wonderfully! I hope to see stories that are not one shots from you as you've the talent, and your work is a joy to read.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wowie. In the first chappy, Orochi was pretty kinky with all of that lover talk. I definitely liked the story over all and can't wait for a second ending.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a horrifyingly angst-filled ending. It makes me all shuddery inside. Screw artistic creativity!I WANNA HAPPY ENDING!!
On a side note, it was really hard to read the way it was formatted. I think you need to add a text wrap to it 'cause the lines just go on and on and on and....further on.
On a side note, it was really hard to read the way it was formatted. I think you need to add a text wrap to it 'cause the lines just go on and on and on and....further on.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::Dies of blood loss:: Ooh I do sympathize for Sakura, sequel???
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. The story flowed nicely and for it being your first lemon I really thought it was done very well. Dark. But, I liked that aspect. I only noticed a few minor spelling errors. Nothing big. One thing though I will mention, is that I think it would help if you spaced out your paragraphs. Including all dialogue in a seperate paragraph. It looks like a giant wall of text and is rather hard to read at times. I almost didnt read the fic for that reason when I saw how it was posted. But, I did it anyway which was good for me. I will be looking forward to more updates!