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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why do I feel like Naruto is in for a surprise with that "play"? lol
Once you get a beta you should ask her to look at the already posted chapters, they are loaded with grammar and tenses mistakes. It spoils your AWESOME story.
Once you get a beta you should ask her to look at the already posted chapters, they are loaded with grammar and tenses mistakes. It spoils your AWESOME story.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would beta for you! My email is moocowsareawesome02@yahoo.com
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story as well as the others you've posted, so if you're still in search of a beta, give me a jingle. I'd be happy to assist you. ;)
kamapahl@gmail.com
kamapahl@gmail.com
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sakuyalovesme@yahoo.com
I'm a writer with block, I'd be willing to beta. Let me know.
I'm a writer with block, I'd be willing to beta. Let me know.
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was thinking all sorts of bad things about Sai and was mad as hell because I got caught up with Itachi's emotions.:) Now that I know he's in college and working as well I feel kinda bad for him. Maybe he and Itachi can develop a sort of relationship as friends first then possibly something more. Since Itachi knows he has changed and is in school. Poor Sai. He must've gotten a bad rap.:(
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story and I love the new element of being a double agent, it only makes the inevitable more complicated lol. I cant wait for Sasuke to FINALLY figure things out, and deliver us the scene were all waiting for lol ;)
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if you could update soon i would be mad happy.
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY MORE
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon