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for The Driver

by brook13baby13

person Anon
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked Chapter 4
person bulve
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
TA-DA-DA-DAAAAAM!!! What's Naruto to do now? it is going to be hell of a life knowing that Sasuke is gay AND he can't have him because of the mission from Hiashi... muahahaha... XD that's cruel to say the least. Anyway, I really totally and unquestionably adore your piece of writting and am waiting for updates every now and then when I have time. Even if I don't, I check if you have submitted another chapter like, let me see, each day! love you lots!!! =]
person Halskr
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update on this. I ahve one question thought. who speaks the last line, Sasuke or Naruto?

“I didn't think I was…that way. After that whole thing I started to…wonder...and came to the conclusion that…I'm… I’m gay.”
person zanax
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“…that wasn't my cum?!”

BEST LINE EVER!!!

UPDATE SOON!
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"... or rather.. I'm gay for you. You did this to me."

"This is my fault?!"

"Yes. What are you going to do about it?"

"Wha-- nothing! I didn't do anyth--"

Naruto snorts and walks off, cutting Sasuke off midsentance.

"Hey! Don't walk away from me! Hey! Come back here! Don't ignore me!!"



Later, Naruto hears a knock on his door and opens it up to find a desperate Sasuke immediately in his arms. Lips, wrapped around his, in a passionate kiss! Yowza!! ^^




(Nah. Obviously, this is why I am not a writer. hehehe. Keep up the good work! ^^)
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My name's on AFF.net too! *is famous*

This betaing thing is really stroking my ego.
person :)
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you have there!
person sameyler
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i wonder whats gonna happen will naruto ever get sasuke? update
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man Sasuke's in such denial. Now, Hiashi wants Naruto to get hired back to the Uchiha Limo after Naruto turned Sasuke down. Why? So he can spy for Hiashi? Naruto's not going to want to. He may want the money but I don't think he'll want to do what Hiashi may have planned.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omigosh! He wants to use Naruto as a spy!! O_O