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Awwh seeing Kakashi, Iruka and Naruto together is so cute, they really make the perfect family. Its a shame he won't be spending the whole time with them and will be rotated around, because it won't be the same. So I figured since its not going to last I'd just cherish the time that the three will be together. Anyway looking forward to the next chapter and Naruto's adorable self.

Cute chapter!

I really enjoyed reading this fic! How utterly adorable Naruto is! I absolutely LOVE chibi fics of the boys. Great job writing this fic out. can't wait to read more! Thanks so much for sharing. :D

awesome chapter! I love how they're spoiling Naruto.
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I luv Naruto the way he is now...u got a great story on ur hands and i cant wait to read more...I like the way u hav Naruto gettin the chance to be a lil kid... wen u think bak in the manga it must've ben hard on him and thats y i luv the fact that u give Naruto a second childhood...

Awesome chapter!
I love chibi Naruto!
update!

I'd be very careful with this new character Kurai. Mary Sues are rarely well received, so I'd be careful of her placement in the story. Unless you want to go back and change her description, I'd give her a very minor role in this story, no more, because you don't want this story to go the route of the many Mary Sue worshiping pieces of garbage out there (I have one specific one in mind who's Mary Sue is not only that but also a self insertion, who despite being introduced as a minor character becomes to focus of the story over the main characters. You definitely do not want to go the route of this writer, because her stories had the potential to be good but are completely ruined by one little thing).

I am enjoying that story so far, chibi Naruto is very cute, but I will say I'm feeling a bit worried by the introduction of Kurai because depending on how you play it out it could turn a good story into a bad one really fast.

wow now this could go so many ways I hope you keep this going. good job

This is a great story so far. I love how you went back to the past and stayed in the present with Naruto's fear. I am really looking forward to more of this story, soon I hope.

Great chapter! The code was too funny ^_^ I hope whatever Naruto saw wasn't too painful...I mean he's only five and the fact that I care is attributed all to your wonderful writing!