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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! I love this fic! It's so sad, and cute and sweet! I can't wait to read more!!!!
and poor sasuke I think he deserves to vent out some frustration from his father's actions.
and poor sasuke I think he deserves to vent out some frustration from his father's actions.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I love stories where a main character is turned into a child. so unlikely and yet so cute. And that was a great flashback. Very creative. Keep up the good work!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good second chapter, like the insight you gave into the background of Iruka and Naruto.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very sad. Poor Naruto. I like the part at the end though 'BOOM'. Sasuke is funny.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa is everyone when Sasuke's terrifyingly angry!!! This was an inciteful chapter to lead us into understanding. Can't wait for more!! I really like this idea plot for the story!!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Iruka raised Naruto! So sweet! So Sasuke is going to come back and take Naruto, right? I can't wait! Thanks for the new chapter! :)
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto.. have to work at such young age. But luckily Iruka is always there for him. Keep up the good work! I really cannot wait for the next update!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last line.
What a heart-breaking story. :(
Well-written.
update!
What a heart-breaking story. :(
Well-written.
update!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow sasuke is angry! love it when he blew up the training grounds! Hope to see more posessiveness. Update soon please!