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for My Chibi Dobe

by AngelofSorrow

person Briryan
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story I'm really hoping to read more.
=)
person mikepd87
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey wassup luv the story so far cant wait to read the rest of it?
person dutsada
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah so cute! Great idea.. I'd love to see everyone doting on NAruto now hahahaha... Especially Sasuke trying to get NAruto's affections... more please!
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK AngelWings. I think this is the greatest most interesting and exciting story I've read in an extremely long time!!!!!! You've got to finish this one because I think I'll be dying until you update. I can imagine ChibiNaruto being just so so so adorable. I'm glad everybody is thinking about Naruto's past and comparing it to theirs. They will surely appreciate him more at the end won't they? Sasuke's the only one who truly loves him. Well, besides Iruka and Gaara. Keep up your GREATNESS!!! I'll be watching out!!!
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! Chibi Naruto is so cute.Please continue!
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can tell that this is going to be a great story.
I can't wait for more. ♥++
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is very cute... but why does Naruto talk like a 3 year old instead of a 5? The baby talk is a little misplaced.


Other than that, keep up the good work. ^^
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! that's a really good start of a story!! hmm can't wait to see how long it's gonna take for tsunade to find a cure while the rest of the group learn more about the dobe they never really knew.
person Ivy
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah that was sweet and cute ^_^ Unfortunate that he had to do all those jobs at five. Sasuke being jealous was funny. Update this soon!