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hey, wb. real life can be a bitch and otherwise, no fun at all.
anyhoo, that was adorable. though sai does make me snicker. he and sas are so going to throw down when the dust from this other stuff has settled.

hey beautiful, i hope everything is ok in your world.

here at mine things are crazy.

I've been reading this story for quite some time now and though I rarely review a story I have to say this story is one of my favorites. I reread it all the time and the pairings in it are just adorable. please put up the next chapter? I can't wait to read what's in store.

Best wishes,
Rave

when are you going to up date it has been a while since the lost chapter please up date soon I want to know how you will finish it

It's rather cute. The 'babytalk' kind of irritates me, but I think it's just seeing it in text instead of HEARING it that's doing it. My main objection to the story is just that the Kyuubi didn't start coming out until Naruto was close to his teens. At 5, he wouldn't have known the demon was even in him, much less that it was the reason the villagers were so cruel to him.

Hey there. I really like your story on chibi Naruto. It's cool how you give all the characters someone to love and make sure they're all happy! I'm especially happy that Gaara and Neji got together so that Naruto and Sasuke aren't the only yaoi couple. I just have one complaint. I don't know if it's because of uploading or not but your grammar check is pretty bad. Words are doubling up and some of them are just spelled wrong though you can tell what you meant to say. Is there any chance you could go back and fix it or maybe find someone too? I don't even mind doing it. I'm only complaining because it sometimes gives me a headache to read it. Other then that I love your story and can't wait to see the next chapter. Take care!

Chap. 16 This chapter develops and flows so fluidly with the characters and troubles each one is dealing with that it keeps you glued to your seat and computer!! I was so happy and excited when I saw this up!! YAY :) I really enjoyed this chapter and am so cheering for Shino and hope to hear wedding bells in his future!!

That was the best chapter yet. I am such a fan of your stories! Keep on writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks for the new chapter! always so great!!! I love this story^^!

I love your story and I am sooooooo excited that you updated. I have actually re-read it several times! I do not know if you are an author who wants someone to point out typos or not, but just in case....here goes. When people are eating in this story you keep saying that person A severed person B. Severed is the past tense of sever- which means to cut. As in, "The kunai struck deep and severed a major artery". I think you meant to type served and your spell check is messing it up because it is that way through the whole story. The other typo was when you said that the firefly princess was in a comma. A comma is a type of punctuation that I abuse regularly. I think you meant to say coma- which is a deep, non-responsive, sleep-like state. If I have overstepped my bounds I sincerely apologize and hope you do not take it too much to heart. Looking foward to the next chapter.