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Omg this is such a great story! Usually, my lazy ass just rates the stories that I like, but I definitely thought this story was worth leaving a review. I just love all of the pairings and their relationship beginnings and well as the excellent chibi talk. I must say, u r quite fluent in writing the language. Excellent work! Oh and I can't forget one of my favorite parts: the poor unfortunate, yet quite deserving, punishments that most of the high ranking shinobi r currently serving thanks to our mother-hen iruka. Although, if u think about it, those 'babysitting' sessions were probably what tought little naruto on the skills of how to be an excellent ninja. But still. If I were iruka, I would have probably done the same thing. Hehehe. On a side note, there was one little thing that did bug me throughout the whole story and that was all the spelling and grammer mistakes! I usually just stop reading stories with too many grammer/spelling mistakes, but this story was just too good to quit reading. I hope I'm not overstepping any boundaries here but if u want, although I'm not the world's best proofreader, I'll look over it again and fix some of them. Just drop a line at kairna3@yahoo.com and let me know. If not, that's all good too. I still can't wait to read what's next! That little chibi is a better matchmaker than any of those online matchmaking services!

:D Love your Story! Keep up the good work!

Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I REALLY enjoy your story. It is one of the best I have read so far and I can't wait to read your next chapter. I really hope you will continue the story cause I am so into it now and I read the story a few times so far and I love it more each time I do.

I HAVE MISSED YOU!!

and i have no idea on the translation....so....all good to me!

lovely chppie!

Sniff....sniff...T_T .....we want MORE!!! Sniff...sniff....BEGGING!!!! PLEASE!!!! This story is just so CUTE!!! Adorable and Sweet!!!

I really really love your story!! I hope there will be the next chapter(s) soon!!
You're doing a great work so don't stop before the end pretty please!!!!!!!!
Bye ^.^

It has been a wild since you have up date. When will I see another chater? I hope it is soon
let me know. I really want to know now what happen to Naruto and sasuke.

Ummmm.
I like this.
I like itachi is a g0od guy in this fic.
Ur a great author.
I hope the update relase s0on. .

that was so cute!! i wonder... is that it? oh and due to the fact that i get annoyed by wrong translations... can i fix them?? i don't mean to offend its just a pet peve. @.@ "welcome home little sister" Would be "Mei mei, ni hue lai le?" which translates almost directly to 'little sister, you're back?" "Who are your guests?" is "Ni de ke ren shi shui?" and 'yes big brother" is "Shi de ge ge." again no offence intended... @.@ great writing! ^^

Love your stories and i know your in the middle of find another muse so do ur best I will wait for the next chapter