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for My Chibi Dobe

by AngelofSorrow

schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE ALIVE!!!!!!!!


sorry, got carried away. as for the fic, YAY!!!! another chappie!

miko ~_^
person Timber
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13

I just cried over the part where.....can one child change the world?? If its Naruto yes they can....just had to cry my eyes out!!!!
person Timber
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just ran across this and fell in love with it just from the brief description I found on the main....Naruto/Sasuke page that list all the stories. Just finished chapter one and am hooked!!

I love how the characters are written and so far how the story is developing!! So looking forward to digging into the rest of this story!!
person Timber
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh...had to tell you....chapter one had me in tears!! I'm a huge Naruto fan and kids are the greatest!! How anyone could be mean to them or not care for them just breaks my heart!! I love getting to see this kind of view of Naruto's childhood....because we've all wanted to know those details....or at least I have always wanted to know more. :) This story is such a fresh and interesting perspective....LOVE IT!!!


Looking forward to all the emotions you inspire as I read on!! :)
person Timber
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Quote-To be pa’pared and carry wude for qwickies ....lol Ok this made me choke as I tried unsucessfully to breath and laugh at the same time....didn't work out too well....thougt I was going to die.....REALLY ....I thought I was for awhile there!!

I LOVE how CHIBI Naruto talks!!! CUTE!!!
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incredible update..I'm glad you came back to work more on this. :)
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now this is the best chibi tale i have read so far and i normaly hate chibi anything but this one works thank you and i plan to check out your other stuff
person AngeloflightPd
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
when will you up date My Chibi Dobe its bin a long time since u up dated. I want to know what happens to Naruto. dose he trun back or what; and what happen to Naruto and Sasuke do they get together.
person Regina
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD this story is awesome... can i ask you something??? could i draw this out for you?
person crazy_good
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehe......that was soooo good! i love naru, he is sooooo cute! anyway plz update soon and who is "his favorite Yoru Shinobi"?