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for My Chibi Dobe

by AngelofSorrow

person Jan
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story! I can't wait for chapter 14 to be posted! Hope it's soon ^_^

Jan
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great!! I was praying since chapter 9 that you would put my Gaara and Neji together and you DID!!!!! *does happy dance* They're my second OTP! Now all I need is for you to get Shino and Sukora together and then my OTP, Sasuke and Naruto and I'll be a happy fangirl! I'd also like to see the progress bwtween Jaraiya and Tsunade... Oh! And I'd like to see what will happen between Shizune and Itachi - my first time encountering that couple... Hmmm. Very interesting story. I love how Naruto has touched all of their lives in some way even though non of them knew it. I just have one question; Are you ever going to reveal who Naruto's biological father is? From what I can tell only Iruka and the 3rd Hokage know/knew.

~Duchess
person a kitsunes light
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eheh I lOVED IT!!! especially naru's last coment! yuuuuupy I can't wait to read more!
person Gwyllion
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing update! I enjoyed this one the most. Thank you so much! :D
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i missed this fic lol. again another good chapter and i cant wait to see what will happen next. update again soon ^_~
person japanese pro
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"shut up" is damare NOT damatte. and "pervert" is hentai NOT hentaisha...
learn japanese properly before you use it in fics...
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for that long update it was appreciated ^_^
person cynaga
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS!!!!! more please!
person animelover
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, i don't have a lot to say that doesn't sound like gushing. ;-) definitely worth the wait. we're almost to sasunaru, right? LOL!
person Briryan
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute chapter!