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for My Chibi Dobe

by AngelofSorrow

schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I've been reading this one since the beginning and it's great and a lot of fun and I love chibi Naruto and Itachi with Kisame and Deidara and I'm really enjoying the whole thing. *takes a breath* So, yeah, there you go. Looking forward to what happens next.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol poor Itachi
person animelover
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, i'm pretty sure i've reviewed this already, but i so totally love this concept of naru being a child again. and watching sasu drool is kinda funnty too. there are times i feel like i have a split personality so can relate. LOL!
person Dani
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOw this was the first time I read this and it was great. Thanks for having such fabulous long chapters.
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this, it's sweet and happy. Just what the doctor ordered after a long day.

Thank you.
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that he got his own niken(sp?) I didn't see that coming. Can't wait until the next installment. Will Naruto be working on Shino and his crush? or someone else?
person asm613
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very uplifting and entertaining story. Love the idea and your execution of that idea is an adorable story. Thanks and Happy Holidays!
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has been so good. I just love the chibi Naruto. Keep up the great writing.*hugs*
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I am enjoying your story and your not a bad writer, but you have this one sour note in the story: the Mary Sue who will not go away. And given Shino's interest, I get the feeling that you plan for her to stick around and be a somewhat main character. Mary Sue's are like kryptonite to a good story and your getting a good dose of it with Sukora's character.
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
owwww, my eyes hurt... i've been up all night reading this... it pulled me in. XDD anyways, great story, and i hope you get at least ONE more chapter out before the new year.