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for Heart of the Ocean

by princessandthezombie

schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, I hope you update sometime soon.
person shadowphoenix143
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work! They really needed that moment together because now they are more determined then ever to come out of this alive! I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Naruto won't die in your story!
person hisoka
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...is a pistol a barrol gun?glad itachi finally went alittle crazy over his own stupidity.wonder how the rest of the woman feel when they dont jump for their men,that was real dedication to come back only after such a short parting.well wish them luck and hope you can update soon
person kotikiz
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waw!It's wanderful chapter!!! love it!!!
person LadyWolf
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat!!! But we all know what happens in the end...:O( I hated it when I saw the Movie Titanic and I'm sure I will hate it here too...;O( I really, really hate death fics......

But I can't stop reading!
person hisoka
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was wondering were kiba was,so how do they expect to get off the boat if there are no life boats left?hope you can update soon
person hisoka
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im wondering if their gonna die or not, like in the movie(that i never saw,3 hours is a long time).i want revenge against itachi and kisame but i dunno if ill get it...well ill find someone who does.hope you can update soon
person shadowphoenix143
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can handle Naruto dying in this! I already feel like crying!
person nahtsea
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
an interesting story.

i hated titanic when it came out, but i like the way you're playing with it. if kate winslet had been a boy instead of a girl, i think the movie would have been better.

the only thing that i have to say negative about this story is this last chapter. i felt like things were rushed too much. its an interesting story, and i'm quite sure you've never been on an iceburg-ed ship, but it felt a little too rushed at the end.

but, other than that, great story. i like naruto and sasuke's chemistry together.
person hisoka
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hes really going to talk to him?he should just write a note, knock on the door and run away that always works...usually if the persons not use to being harrassed.well i wish naruto and sasuke luck if they actually get a future, and what of kiba?hope you can update soon