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for Heart of the Ocean

by princessandthezombie

person charmpit
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I love it...Naruto is swinging horse meat that puts Itachi to shame.

Great lemon.
person hisoka
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
theres always something happy broken with bad news, just hope naruto takes this well as well as when he found out sasuke was a guy.hope you can update soon
person hisoka
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it really didnt take much for naruto to realize his feelings wonder how hell feel about what itachis doing to sasuke,well as long as thier happy who cares ne.hope you can update soon(though 2 chapters was surprising and exciting).
person Dragon7
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that Naruto except Sasuke for who and what he is.
person Nikana
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this and the movie was just unfurling itself in my head but SO so much better(I can't stand the real Rose)and it hit me so hard that I went into the net and searched for the original script.^^
Please update soon and disentangle this whole mess Itachi/Sasuke-girl
so good
ja ne!
person Dragon7
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How could you end it there it was really starting to get good.
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATEEEE!!!!!!!!!
person hisoka
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a aquward way to find something like that out,'thats something women shouldnt have'.poor sasuke he just couldnt help but get excited hopefully naruto will take this better than some and insted of yelling or avoiding sasuke hell just except it.its like excepting that your best friend is a hermapherdite or a transvestite(really close).well hope you can update soon
person Dragon7
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You shocked me with that twist at the end Princess. I was a little confused when Naruto and his friend were introduced to the story, I thought maybe you were going to give Naruto's friend a love interest as well. I don't know why I was so shocked by that, the amount of of fanfictions with that couple used to surprise me. I just wonder why he is forcing Sasuke to participate in it and why Sasuke is allowing it to happen. I guess that answer will come in due time. I am looking forward to Sasuke and Naruto's first meeting as well how your story will differ from the movie.