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Hey I know what u mean that song is good.... I like her voice she sounds so erotic on everything guys love about girls... Its all true women r so undeniably beautiful that who wouldn't want to kiss them guy or girl

I'd be really interested in seeing where you want to go with this fic. The only thing I didn't like was that the song lyrics weren't in order. It kinda made me pause when I was reading it because I love that song and I decided to listen to it while reading. Other than that, I liked it and I thought it was pretty good. I hope you do decide to continue it. I'll check back to see whether you did or not.

I liked the way that you didn't use the whole song. It gave an element that the song had already started playing before Hinata made her move. Also, for your first yuri, it was a nice attempt! I still haven't got around to a full yuri senerio yet! Killing part is, I just added a fic with the title I Kissed a Girl in the 3some/4+some catagory! Lol but please keep creating more delicious plotlines. Try you hand at Shika/Neji/Shika or Gaara/Shika/Gaara. *looks up hopefully* Well, have fun and Ganbatte!

smexy sexy.

keep it going.