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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great~!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was hot! I love Itachi's characterization here, he's sort of the 'cool' uke type, it was nice and fitted his personalty. I also loved your description of Naruto and how he is looking for the 'one' instead of doing the casual sex, its fitting. This was good.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really different and completely AWESOME! I loved it! I hope you make another oneshot spin-off of this story! :)
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh did you add more to the story? Because earlier when i read it, it ended here...
Without a word, he stood from the bed, scooped Itachi up into his arms and made for the bathroom, intent on washing every inch of that gorgeous body just so he could ravish it again.
I'm so happy you added more...or if it was already there and i somehow missed it, sorry about that. I'm going to read it now :D
Without a word, he stood from the bed, scooped Itachi up into his arms and made for the bathroom, intent on washing every inch of that gorgeous body just so he could ravish it again.
I'm so happy you added more...or if it was already there and i somehow missed it, sorry about that. I'm going to read it now :D
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, that was just a hoot! and my first naruita fic ... usually i do itanaru, but hey! i like branching out. lol! have to say i kinda chuckled when i picture naru carrying ita in the bedroom when he's shorter. oh and sasu's face when he realizes it's his brother screaming naru's name.
absolutely hilarious! naru as ita's seme ... definitely on my "must read again" list. ;-)
absolutely hilarious! naru as ita's seme ... definitely on my "must read again" list. ;-)
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW sexy ass hell
drooling all over my computer gosh so HOT
drooling all over my computer gosh so HOT
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_o....only 1 review? what the hey is wrong with these people? that was an absolutely wonderful NaruIta.
i'd take itachi over sasuke's ass anyday. really really great work. i would love to see more of this pairing from ya in the future. keep it up!
i'd take itachi over sasuke's ass anyday. really really great work. i would love to see more of this pairing from ya in the future. keep it up!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, this is easily one of the best NaruIta stories i've ever read. I wonder how Sasuke reacted when he found out.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story - you have a really talent for writing, if you continue this story or write any new ones I'd love to read them!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! *drools*
As you can tell I absolutly love the pairing ItaNaru/NaruIta ;P and this fic was one of the best I've read.
So thanks for writing it, I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care. Hugs
As you can tell I absolutly love the pairing ItaNaru/NaruIta ;P and this fic was one of the best I've read.
So thanks for writing it, I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care. Hugs