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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... I more than liked it alot... I loved it!!
The whole fact that Naruto and Gaara were half-breed demons was so subtle, really only clarified at the end, made for an interesting twist, but I have to ask - are you going to continue this? Cause if you did, that would be awesome. I loved the dynamic between the characters and am interested in the set up and finding out more about their strange little family. Where did Iruka find all three of them (not to mention two half-demons.. and for that matter, does he know?), what is their everyday lives like, and what kind of world do they live in that there are even demons at all? Obviously they are not ninja. The story itself as a oneshot is great, but for you to explore and expand it would be even better. ^^
Keep up the good work!
The whole fact that Naruto and Gaara were half-breed demons was so subtle, really only clarified at the end, made for an interesting twist, but I have to ask - are you going to continue this? Cause if you did, that would be awesome. I loved the dynamic between the characters and am interested in the set up and finding out more about their strange little family. Where did Iruka find all three of them (not to mention two half-demons.. and for that matter, does he know?), what is their everyday lives like, and what kind of world do they live in that there are even demons at all? Obviously they are not ninja. The story itself as a oneshot is great, but for you to explore and expand it would be even better. ^^
Keep up the good work!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
continue!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Didn't see that coming!
Thought it was gonna be a GaaNaruSasu.
I don't think I've seen these three together before, but it's pretty good so far! Keep it up!
Thought it was gonna be a GaaNaruSasu.
I don't think I've seen these three together before, but it's pretty good so far! Keep it up!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't wait for their to be a lemon all the way!!! I really like it ! But poor Iruka hope he is alright! How many time they should have been together for him to almost have alzeimer!
I wanna know more about the plot too,soo... I will be waiting!!!
I wanna know more about the plot too,soo... I will be waiting!!!