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This...actually made me cry.


There are hundreds, perhaps millions of NaruSasuSaku fics out there, but only a precious few really manage to capture the true essence of team 7's unique relationship.

Kudos to you.

that was so sweet. Is there gonna b more?

Aww this is so sweet... I really love the emotions in this. You did a great job writing the complexities of their situation and how Naruto feels... Just enough angst and a happy ending :)

Interesting start, will you continue this or is it meant to be a one-shot? It was very emotionally charged. Had a nice flow to it, and I liked how you made Naruto the one that made things work for Sasuke and Sakura. Will Naruto ever find he can admit this is his son? Will the boy ever figure it out, especially when he doesn't develop the Sharingan? Didn't notice any blatant spelling or grammar errors that took anything away from reading. One thing that did confuse me is did you mean to say Naruto was just the sperm donor instead of blood donor? At first I thought maybe they had some kind of artificial creation of the child but as I read the story it became apparent that Sakura got pregnant by having sex with Naruto. Just a little suggestion, you might want to change the reviews so those not logged in can review. I know a lot of folks don't log in unless they are doing posting. I'm one of those guilty charges *snickers*. Thanks for sharing the story here on AFF. Take care and I'll keep my eyes open for more on this.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com

*tries to convince jaw to close again*
oooh, me likey already.....
umm, you are planning on making another chapter i hope? cause i'd love to see what could happen. if not, that's ok.... but heck, that's gonna be a doozy!!