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Very interesting, I can't wait to see what other girls Naruto gets! I do hope if he's building a harem Hinata will get in on it.

Well i really liked that off to a good start love Haku being a girl exacly how it was ment to be can't wait for the interaction with Hinata and i wonder what you will do with other girls given your other story

AMAZING! Once again you've written a great slave fic that's made me ridiculously eager for more! While I still want to see more of Slaves of the Maelstrom, this fic has got me just as hooked. I imagine this will be HakuNaruHina, a pairing I love, and I'm really eager to what you've got planned. This Kouingan seems really interesting, and I'm curious as to why Kyuubi talks the way she does. I also wonder how Hinata will take the news of Naruto's new abilities. You're the only writer I've found who writes good Naruto slave fanfiction, so please keep writing. Slaves of the Maelstrom or this fic, whichever update comes first, keep up the wonderful work; I'll be waiting for more!

Wow! That had me laughing a lot. Naruto and femHaku nice combo and I hope Hinata, Tayuya, and Anko gets in on the fun too. Please up date soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Anko, Hinata, Kurenai, and Temari.

Somehow simultaneously erotic and amusing. Very well done. I most definitely like Naruto-kun's doujutsu. It's certainly a unique one. Here's a deal for you: you keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing.

good story, funny as hell. most horrible experience ever priceless.

I really enjoyed it, please continue the story.

nice work keep it up
UPDATE QUCK pleas

Interesting story i hope to read more on this ... also i hope Kin and Tayuya become Naruto's Slaves

Jaw drops.... okay.... let me think on this for a minute........ PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait for Naruto and Haku and I'm hoping a certain Hyuuga (Hinata not Neji!) join in as well. I loved the line that Kakashi had to give Naruto the "birds and the bees" talk that had me laughing. Keep up the great work