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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As wonderfully interesting, and oddly arousing as always. looking forward to seeing more Hinata in the near future as well as Haku doing her thig.... It's fun for me...
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter man! The scenes with Anko were halarious! And Anko calling Haku snow bunny, gave me an incredibly hot mental image of Haku in bunny out fit. Maybe you can have Haku cosplay a bunny later. I think white ears would go best, and not just because that's the color of snow, but because white would really stand out against her black hair and match her pale complection.
I love what you did with Kanashibari and the water whip! Though, I think the water whip should've given both pleasure AND pain. I can't wait to see more Kouingan jutsus, epsecially if Anko teaches Naruto Orochimaru's justs. And Hinata's training is cool too. I can't wait to see more of this. I would like to see some actual sex though, and that blowjob that Haku gave Naruto was TOO SHORT!! And I know you can do better. Slaves of the Malestrom proves that.
Anyway keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can! (I'd REALLY appretiate it if you'd try to update sooner than this one. The wait was killing me! :)
I love what you did with Kanashibari and the water whip! Though, I think the water whip should've given both pleasure AND pain. I can't wait to see more Kouingan jutsus, epsecially if Anko teaches Naruto Orochimaru's justs. And Hinata's training is cool too. I can't wait to see more of this. I would like to see some actual sex though, and that blowjob that Haku gave Naruto was TOO SHORT!! And I know you can do better. Slaves of the Malestrom proves that.
Anyway keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can! (I'd REALLY appretiate it if you'd try to update sooner than this one. The wait was killing me! :)
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wll I enjoyed the chapter but I have a question. From what I understand from the series is that the Byakugan is more perceptive then the Sharingan. Considering that the Hyuuga can see chakra on a better scale then the Uchiha can and also considering that they can look through objects amd see almost 360. The only thing that might help an Uchiha resist Naruto's eyes is their ability to predict what someone is doing IF they can see them. I emphasized the if because if the Sharingan user does not see the person casting the technique, they are like everyone else and have to wait and see what happens (which is how Sasuke could follow Naruto with his sharingan when Naruto made shadow clones, he just remembered which was the real one and followed him).
Anyways I'm looking forward to what happens next.
Anyways I'm looking forward to what happens next.
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter, I can't wait to see more of Hinata's training!
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha nice going on this, it was most...enjoiable! And finally a dojutsu that is not a sharingan & bakugan combined! Do update soon i can't wait to see what else you come up with!
Peace & Love BastardOmega
Peace & Love BastardOmega
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Naruto taught Anko a lesson she won't soon forget. LOL! GO NARUTO!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo! It's back!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I realy hope You have Sakura Join the Harem I know most Dont like NaruSaku but realy theres no reason for her not to be in it other then people not understanding how there Relationship would work
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this update. I'm glad your back with this update. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON AND MORE OFTEN.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.