rate_review Reviews

Wow! Now this is very interesting story you got here. Instead of the usual PWP stories of the characters fucking each other, you've written a story with plot that has a very tasteful lemony underline feeling to it, not to mention a romantic sense as well. Naruto's bloodline is quite interesting, and you made him not use it for perverted uses. It's in his character to do this as well as 'enslaving' Haku to save her life.

As I said, there is romantic sense in this story. I like the pairing of Naruto and Haku here, for these two characters are well suited for each other. Not to mention you will eventually have Hinata join the pair to form a threesome. I can already feel the love between Haku and Naruto, and Hinata's love for him will add more to Naruto's heart.

So I look forward to reading more chapters of this interesting story. Given the erotic nature of the plot, I guess it's too kinky and erotic to post at Fanfiction.net, for I couldn't find it there, but I hope you can update this story much as you can here on AFF. :)

And here I had thought this story abandoned. Huh. Looks like Neji will have to train hard if he faces Naruto.

It's good to see your work again and I'm delighted from what I've read. The Mirouku temple huh? And Naruto gave Anko a "hard time" actually several of them to be exact and poor Hinata is having a super hard too from her training too. Pity Anko royally pissed off Naruto with that shredding of Haku's pants, she'll never know what she's missing or does she? I can't wait for the next chapter and I can't wait to see if Haku takes on Hinata with injutsu.(Naruto would be the only winner in that one.) Keep up the great work!!!

since I can't put this on alert or anything, please email me when the next chapter is posted.

I love this story so far. having Haku whipped is understandable but distasteful. the rest of the story was hilarious though. from the "interrogation" he gave her to Hinata's Volunteering at the end. very creative idea.

and every female submits to him and they create a clan for him. Why would he have to join a clan instead of creating a new one?

this be fucking epic.
pleasure point junken. one poke and you cream your pants.

dude i love this. before i always wished i had the sharingan now i wish i had this instead sounds like there will be a LOT of happy girls in the chunin exams hehehe. i know you said you weren't happy with chapter 2 but i was
when i read lemon style stories i do enjoy a good story with it and yours totally rocks. i really would like to see uzuki yugao anko and maybe hana or tsume in part of the story with naruto using his abilities to bed them or just make them moan in pleasure at thier request of course.

"I will volunteer for the test!" Haha, that has got to be the funniest Hinata moment I have ever seen! Update soon please.^-^

Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!