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Please update really soon!!!! Like really really soon!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!! Hopefully with a Naruto/Haku lemon. :)

Please update and if possible have an update soon!!! I love Haku but I have to admit this is the first slave!Haku I have found and I must say I like the idea alot so please update really soon!!!!

I gotta say, aside from its, *ahem* uses, an eye that sees the electrical impulses of a persons body does seem like it could happen in the manga. I really hope you update soon, I wanna see where this goes, and how the different girls take it ( especially Ino, Moegi, Sakura, and Hanabi)

This story is incredible! The characterizations are spot-on, the premise is well thought out, the pacing is perfect, the dialogue is deftly handled, and the grammar is perfect as well! This story is truly a precious find to any fan of Naruto fanfiction. I don't consider myself much of a Naruto/Hinata fan, but it seems as though this story is angling for a harem, or at least, two or three partners for Naruto, and it's so well done that it doesn't even matter who the pairings are at this point. Pleas, Please, Please, tell me this story hasn't been abandoned, it's always a shame when good stories aren't finished, but in this case it would be an absolute crime! Here's hoping you keep up the good work.

Sincerely,

Ronin721

This has so much potential! I think this could be just as hot if not hotter as your other Naruto story. Hope you have Haku and Naruto have sex soon. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can.

I'm very interested in seeing where this goes.
I was wondering would you be willing to allow me to use the idea of the 'seduction eye' to write a story with?

UPDATE PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE BOTH OF YOU STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn... Original, well written, and pretty damn hot! Nice work, hope you continue!

This story just getting please update soon.