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I was reading Kouingan again and thought maybe you should add one of the filler girls. I am not sure what her name is but she is the female ninja bee handler from the "The Search for the Rare Bikochu Beetle" mission. I am putting the thought here because with Naruto's Kouingan that it would be easier to get her in but it is perfectly do able in both stories and at least I think she is hot. By the way I have read both Kouingan and Slaves of the Maelstrom several times already so please keep up the good work with both of them. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.

Very nice! Sakura wearing G-strings, Hinata feeling herself up in front of her family, and more! Keep it coming!

this story is totally awesome
update soon
like now

Really well done! I love the way you wrote the Kyuubi, and how you kept Haku alive! In fact, i don't think there's anything i don't like in this! Please update soon, I can't wait to find ut where this is going. Thanks for writing, it's been a pleasure to read :)

Hmm you made it an A-class secret with that kind of punishment i can't help but think that is a rule that you made to be broken by somebody by accident and duh it hit Hinata that strong she has a crush on him but they don't quite relize that yet do they ;) i like how you made the collar but i think they would have been able to make them with leather oh well and ya i will ask to try and include Shion at some point and man Hinata loves those eyes that cause her to beg

This story is fantastic! The creative way you have manipulated the Naruto story line, makes this one of the best Naruto fan fics I have read. I cant wait for new chapters.
Skeeve

i really really enjoy this story damn fun and exciting hope you keep writing good and long chapters, an i just wonder if you could reply that it is a pairing of NAruto/Haku/Hinata ion this story if you wrote it somewhere i must have missed it so see ya next chapter

A very good chapter. I would say that Haku is right in her assessment of the Kouingan but the fact that Hinata has strong feelings for Naruto probably multiplied the effects on her. That is cool that Naruto is going to learn jyuken. I am glad that you are not making the Kouingan a Deus ex Machingan (don't think you spelled that right.) ability. There are way to many of those type of fics or they do it badly. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, Temari, and femKyuubi.

you may not be happy with the chapter but i feel you did a great job on it i really got a laugh at the end with the way hinata said she would volunteer please update again a.s.a.l.a.

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon.