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SPICE NOTHING!!! THROW HER IN! Ahem I mean, I like hinata and naruto stories very much and I like the idea of bakyugan and koreingan mixing into something very new. Besides I think Haku wouldn't mind sharing him. I like the idea of new techniques in the jyuken style will you be focusing on striking areas to cause pain or pleasure? Or even cause paralysis or unconsciousness? You have alot of open doors of ideas to look through and I can't wait to see which one you step into. SO KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND THANK YOU FOR THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!

Vary cool

So gald to see more if this. I can't wait for the NaruHaku goodness in the next installment. Update soon!

Hinata volunteering to be Naruto's practice dummy is awesome! I can't wait to see how these sessions make her turn out. If she's more confident and able to hold her own I won't mind. Will Naruto have a threesome with Hinata and Haku????

I'm really enjoying these two stories you're working on. I'm surprised Naruto didn't stop Haku from calling herself a slave and things like that; I expected him to be very adamant that she be treated like a person, even if only by the people who know his secret at the moment. I'm guessing Hinata was so strongly affected because of her attraction to Naruto, and not because of the Byakugan. Of course, if they try it on Hanabi they'll say it's because she's too young, and if they try it on Hiashi he'll say he's too strong-willed, so Hinata will have to come clean if they want to know the truth. Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter of this story; how the Kouingan evolves, what Naruto learns, Hinata losing some inhibition, and maybe a little lemony goodness. See you then!

Interesting story you got here, and a unique twist although it is kind of like the other story you got up I just hope you make enough differences so they aren't too similar. Well I see that Haku is getting into things, and I wonder what will happen when Hinata is left alone with Naruto for their training. Plus I can't wait to see him use it on Sakura as well, since they will be training too I can't wait to see them together as well. I do see a future problem with the clans as a new bloodline ability shows up. Although since it's a harem fic I get the feeling you'll have Naruto basically married off to one member of each powerful clan just to keep them all happy. As for the last chapter it wasn't too bad, you put in some nice little background there that was needed anyway.

Amazing, can't wait for the next chapter.

God job with the first chapter, please add more soon.

Great Fic.
Keep it going!
(it has (*gasp!*) plot. That's something really hard to find on this site. Not that I mind...much...)
NOTE: Don't expect a hell of a lot of reviews on this site.

wow fantastic story please update this story and your story Slaves of the Maelstrom as soon as life allows