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by Girlwithideals

person Ikippiki
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No don't worry it wasn't that bad! I found it pretty good. I'm just a bit disappointed because you didn't tell more about Sasuke and Neji's relationship. ( Don't mind me I just wanted a lemon lol, don't blame me, that pair is hot!)
All in all, I really enjoyed this story!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story. and i'm glad Itachi spared his brother because, to me if he killed him. i have a feeling he would regret it that would make him no diffrent from his father. and i think Sasuke (more matured) and Neji would end up together somehow wish you mentioned something about those two in the 6 years later thing.
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work!Congrats on finishing your story! It was a fun ride. ^^
I do agree that the ending felt a bit rushed, but it was a happy one, so no harm done.


person Ikippiki
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... Sasuke is back! I really hope it ends as a SasuNeji, I really like that pair. I just love Itachi in this story even if he doesn't say much, lol, that's just the way he is.
The only thing I found that I can criticize is your spelling mistakes. Getting a beta could solve this minor problem!
Can't wait to read the rest of the story!! Update soon don't make me go crazy!

Oh, and is my computer not working properly or did you post the same chapter twice?
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh thank goodness you updated and oh man i have a feeling there's going to be blood!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!! Whats Itachi gonna do?! OPH noes!! *runs around in circles* I loved this chapter! I hope to read more soon!!! *gives you fudge cause the cookies are all gone*
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yuu is pretty smart for a baby.

Also, Sasuke seemed to have an "Oh SHIT" moment when he realized that Naruto had become far more than just some toy to his brother. Haha. Itachi's going to make Neji's revenge seem like a cakewalk.. hehehe.

Keep up the good work! (Its been a hell of a long while since the last update. I'm glad to see you're back! ^^)
person a kitsunes light
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated again! Thank you sooo much! I loved it!
I just hope sasuke really changed and he doesn't hurt someone! And I can't wait to find out what itachi is gonna do now that he knows what happened... Im sooo curius!!!!!!!
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good to see that your back......love the chapter is itachi going to find out that sasuke payed for his crimes tenfold while in prison. will he still kill him? please update as soon as possible. i missed this story
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squee* OMG OMG OMG!!!! XD Ahhhh!!! *runs around* Sorry been so sick and busy lately. Medical problem that isnt really a problem, happens to women all the time XD

Fresh brownies for you!!!!!!!!!